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Kyky232:

my group wrote a miniplay for theater :) *Meus walks up to his own reflection(aka draco)* Draco- Oh dear, look at this one again… Meus- You again? What do you want now? Draco- Why so dreary, kid? Don’t tell me they have been corrupting you from my ways. (menacingly) Meus- You don’t control me. Draco- Oh but i do- don't defy me child, you are weak,You don't know what you’re doing. Meus- I’ve grown from the last time you’ve seen me. You have no power over me. Draco- I have the power I want. Meus- QUIET! *Draco puts a finger over Meus’ lips* Draco- hush *Meus shifts uncomfortably* Draco- what happened? (dragging out the words) cat got your tongue.. Mouse? *Cyra enters* Meus- Its. MEUS. Cyra- Uh… Hey? I heard some noise. Are you alright, love? (they notice Meus “talking to myself” since she can’t see Draco) *Draco puts an arm around Meus* Draco- Awwww- love… disgusting. Meus- (whispering to Draco) Oh quiet. *draco mocks him silently* Cyra- What was that, Love? Meus- Nothing, dear. Pay no mind. He’s merely a child. Cyra- He? What do you mean by “he”? Meus- There's something I haven’t told you. He’s been haunting me for years. That Draco. *draco grins and waves as though Cyra can see him* Draco- Heyyyyyy~~~ Cyra- Where is he? Is he here? Meus- You can’t see him? Cyra- Oh don’t be silly, Love. You’ve always had an active imagination… always at work. You’ve been reading a little too much haven’t you? Meus- This… This isn’t my imagination! You’re joking. You have to be. Draco- They can't see me. They’ll never believe I’m real. Cyra- Calm down please. I was playing a joke, I’m sorry. I didn’t intend to hurt you. You’re not angry… are you? Draco- C’mon… Angry? (teasing) *Meus looks angry before turning to Cyra* Meus- No sorry, I’m just struggling with work. That's all. Cyra- Oh… Is there anything that I can help with? Meus- Afraid not, my love. Cyra- Oh well, would you like to talk, my love? I’m always here if you need me. <3 Meus- I know, and I’m extremely thankful for that. Don’t ever think I’m not. *Draco laughs loudly* Draco- No you’re not, I would know- I’m in your head. *Meus looks physically upset* Meus- Shut up! SHUT UP! *slides onto the ground* Cyra- Meus! *Sits next to him* Love- are you okay? Draco- What. a . babyyy, you haven't changed! You're still so sensitiveeeee~ *Draco laughs. *Meus shakes his head slowly* Meus- He won’t leave me alone… you believe me don’t you? Cyra- Yes, but swe

Kyky232:

etie… I need to know who he is so I can help you. Draco- they'll never understand, they’ll think you’re crazy- I mean… If they don't already. You’ll be all alone for the rest of your sad little existence as the crazy guy with voices in his head. You’ll have No.One. *Meus hesitates* Cyra- Hey! Don’t listen to whatever that is. You can trust me… I’ll always be here for you. Meus- His name is Draco, I’ve been stuck with him as long as I can remember. Draco- Don’t! You’ll ruin everything for yourself. they’re just baiting you… they'll think you’re crazy- they'll lock you away! Cyra: Go on, you need to be brave or nothing will change. Meus- Everything. Everything changed.

Kyky232:

(i hope you enjoy it)

Kyky232:

@clayy69

RodWav3:

ok den...

Trashy:

ooo, this is nice, ur good at rp???

RodWav3:

not reading all that btw but it looked good

TETSXPREME:

wow its really long

Trashy:

@tetsxpreme wrote:
wow its really long
ikr but its good

RodWav3:

how long it take?

Clayy69:

@kyky232 wrote:
@clayy69
I love how flirty draco is <3 aka me

Kyky232:

@trashy wrote:
ooo, this is nice, ur good at rp???
yea lol

Kyky232:

@rodwav3 wrote:
how long it take?
abt 2 days i would say?

RodWav3:

@kyky232 wrote:
@rodwav3 wrote:
how long it take?
abt 2 days i would say?
damn

DADDYROXY:

wow it's nice

DADDYROXY:

good job

Joe348:

very creative but make Draco meaner

GalaxyzStarz:

Dangggg, very good! My animal hair is sticking up!!

Kyky232:

@joe348 wrote:
very creative but make Draco meaner
I would have but we made it for school and our teacher is really strict. This was pushing the limits

Jeimmy:

i like it

idrfcanymore:

this is amazing. i love it

babygirlXOXO:

Love it

bajjal:

great work! keep it up.

AddyM:

Nice! I love it !

P1n3appl31:

I read it all and I thought I would have enjoyed it better if it was acted out. good job!

GalaxyzStarz:

It's really good!!! Nice job!!!

BrokenMoon:

Your very talented nice job!

GoodLad:

I KNOW THE ANSWER!!!!!!

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AddyM:

@goodlad wrote:
I KNOW THE ANSWER!!!!!!
why dont

GoodLad:

MY BAD

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Sailor:

Nice job.

XxAmberxX:

wow, this is really good, great job! Keep up the great work!!!

bajjal:

sussy baka!

forgetmylife:

its good

Timmyspu:

Nice. Very well done!

XxMimiXx:

wow this is really good👍🏾🦋

Hashtag:

Really well done, nice job.

Astro:

nice job, i like it

ILOVESPAGHETTI:

very well written. good job

ILikeToEatChildren:

it was ok, i was a little lost in the beginning but it got better.

kaleighh533:

when is their gunna be moreeeeee i wanna readd moreee you got me interest now !!!

Maxx1needsfacts:

thats really cool dude. your really good at this :]

Cyber:

Very Well written great job I would love too see more of them.

GalranKeith:

this is really good! i love it! *^*

DekuBear:

0o0 I LOVED THAT!! is it alright if I add this into one of my books? I would love to have you work on it along side me.

Kyky232:

@dekubear wrote:
0o0 I LOVED THAT!! is it alright if I add this into one of my books? I would love to have you work on it along side me.
If you do please give me credit!!! I hate having my work stolen.

bruhgetrekt:

I enjoyed how the entire script flowed together and didn't branch off into a whole other story like I've seen other scripts do. You could be a play writer if you really wanted to be.

Kyky232:

@bruhgetrekt wrote:
I enjoyed how the entire script flowed together and didn't branch off into a whole other story like I've seen other scripts do. You could be a play writer if you really wanted to be.
Thank you so much <3333

DekuBear:

@kyky232 wrote:
@dekubear wrote:
0o0 I LOVED THAT!! is it alright if I add this into one of my books? I would love to have you work on it along side me.
If you do please give me credit!!! I hate having my work stolen.
I will give you credit I dont steal work

selenass:

we need moreeeee pt.2???

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