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Krissy525:

My poem, hope you guys like it: I wish I knew what it felt like to be heard and to be seen Sometimes I sit around wondering if this is all a dream Because for some reason I have all this anger in me And it all comes out when I’m in a vulnerable state But I don’t really mean all the things that I say I sit around and wonder why my life is this way Why every time I feel good, I end up in tears I’m tired of it; it’s been like this for years Sometimes I just need someone who is “all ears” Being diagnosed with depression at the age of eight Has really left me without any faith There are times where I love and times where I hate And I wish all the hate would just go away Sometimes I feel things that aren’t easy to say And sometimes I just want to be left alone to find my way I hate telling people “I’m in so much pain” Because most people don’t seem to care anyway So all of my feelings get bottled away And one day everything explodes Then it all happens again and I already know I’m gonna end up in a place where I want to be alone

TETSXPREME:

i like it C:< keep it up

Krissy525:

@tetsxpreme wrote:
i like it C:< keep it up
thank you so much

XxAmberxX:

amazingly poetic and amazingly brilliant! keep up the great work!

Krissy525:

@xxamberxx wrote:
amazingly poetic and amazingly brilliant! keep up the great work!
thanks

ILOVESPAGHETTI:

good job ;o keep being amazing

QueenNiyah:

i don't like it i love it

MochaBerries:

i love it!! <3 would love to see more from u! :0

Krissy525:

@ilovespaghetti wrote:
good job ;o keep being amazing
thank you

Krissy525:

@queenniyah wrote:
i don't like it i love it
aww thanks

Krissy525:

@mochaberries wrote:
i love it!! <3 would love to see more from u! :0
thanks

BipolarGiraffe:

That's really good! I enjoy the poem. The words are very powerful in this poem, great work!

sciencegirl:

@krissy525 amazing!!! I love it!! Keep it up!! :)

Krissy525:

@sciencegirl wrote:
@krissy525 amazing!!! I love it!! Keep it up!! :)
thank you

Krissy525:

@bipolargiraffe wrote:
That's really good! I enjoy the poem. The words are very powerful in this poem, great work!
thank you

Sharkattack123:

Nice,keep up the good work

Krissy525:

@sharkattack123 wrote:
Nice,keep up the good work
thank you so much

Sharkattack123:

@krissy525 wrote:
@sharkattack123 wrote:
Nice,keep up the good work
thank you so much
Np

QueenNiyah:

@krissy525 wrote:
@queenniyah wrote:
i don't like it i love it
aww thanks
yw

DADDYROXY:

It’s rly nice

DADDYROXY:

Good job <3

Krissy525:

@daddyroxy wrote:
Good job <3
thank you

YRJ8498:

@krissy525 wrote:
@daddyroxy wrote:
Good job <3
thank you
fire!!

Krissy525:

@yrj8498 wrote:
@krissy525 wrote:
@daddyroxy wrote:
Good job <3
thank you
fire!!
thank you

ItzDanger:

good job, have you considered song writing ?

Krissy525:

@itzdanger wrote:
good job, have you considered song writing ?
yes i actually have a song written

Krissy525:

@krissy525 wrote:
@itzdanger wrote:
good job, have you considered song writing ?
yes i actually have a song written
thank you

ItzDanger:

@krissy525 wrote:
@krissy525 wrote:
@itzdanger wrote:
good job, have you considered song writing ?
yes i actually have a song written
thank you
no problem, so can you sing or rap or something? I'm just wondering because I write music too

Krissy525:

@itzdanger wrote:
@krissy525 wrote:
@krissy525 wrote:
@itzdanger wrote:
good job, have you considered song writing ?
yes i actually have a song written
thank you
no problem, so can you sing or rap or something? I'm just wondering because I write music too
not really lol

ItzDanger:

@krissy525 wrote:
@itzdanger wrote:
well thats ok just keep practicing
@krissy525 wrote:
@krissy525 wrote:
@itzdanger wrote:
good job, have you considered song writing ?
yes i actually have a song written
thank you
no problem, so can you sing or rap or something? I'm just wondering because I write music too
not really lol

Krissy525:

@itzdanger wrote:
@krissy525 wrote:
ok i will, thank you
@itzdanger wrote:
well thats ok just keep practicing
@krissy525 wrote:
@krissy525 wrote:
@itzdanger wrote:
good job, have you considered song writing ?
yes i actually have a song written
thank you
no problem, so can you sing or rap or something? I'm just wondering because I write music too
not really lol

Angelthequeen22:

its very good

Krissy525:

@angelthequeen22 wrote:
its very good
thank you

27ivastanley:

i love it

phsycoticboy:

dealing with depression eh?

phsycoticboy:

same here

Chloeisdum:

I love it <3

BriannaFloyd:

firee

ItzDanger:

fire bruh fire

Krissy525:

@27ivastanley wrote:
i love it
thank you

Krissy525:

@itzdanger wrote:
fire bruh fire
thank you

Krissy525:

@briannafloyd wrote:
firee
thank you

BriannaFloyd:

@krissy525 wrote:
@briannafloyd wrote:
firee
thank you
no problem

Krissy525:

@chloeisdum wrote:
I love it <3
thank you

Krissy525:

@phsycoticboy wrote:
dealing with depression eh?
yes i am

Aboveusonlysky52:

that poem actully mde me cry that is the sadest thing i ever read next to mike nesmiths death being on the news but thats beside the point

BrokenMoon:

Damn shawty this is fire 🥵🥵

Krissy525:

@aboveusonlysky52 wrote:
that poem actully mde me cry that is the sadest thing i ever read next to mike nesmiths death being on the news but thats beside the point
aww i felt really down when i wrote it

Krissy525:

@brokenmoon wrote:
Damn shawty this is fire 🥵🥵
thnx

Aboveusonlysky52:

@krissy525 wrote:
@aboveusonlysky52 wrote:
that poem actully mde me cry that is the sadest thing i ever read next to mike nesmiths death being on the news but thats beside the point
aww i felt really down when i wrote it
im sorry and if u ever wanna talk abt it im here for u

Krissy525:

@aboveusonlysky52 wrote:
@krissy525 wrote:
@aboveusonlysky52 wrote:
that poem actully mde me cry that is the sadest thing i ever read next to mike nesmiths death being on the news but thats beside the point
aww i felt really down when i wrote it
im sorry and if u ever wanna talk abt it im here for u
its fine and ok im glad to hear that sometimes i just need someone to listen to me

Aboveusonlysky52:

im here for u love whenever u need me

that1prettygirlabby:

goodjobb mah child<3

WetCrustytenticle:

i dont like it

Krissy525:

@aboveusonlysky52 wrote:
im here for u love whenever u need me
ok ill remember that

Krissy525:

@wetcrustytenticle wrote:
i dont like it
i dont need your negativity

Krissy525:

@that1prettygirlabby wrote:
goodjobb mah child<3
thank you mom

WetCrustytenticle:

@krissy525 wrote:
@wetcrustytenticle wrote:
i dont like it
i dont need your negativity
didn't ask+L ratio+you fell off+yb better

Krissy525:

@wetcrustytenticle wrote:
@krissy525 wrote:
@wetcrustytenticle wrote:
i dont like it
i dont need your negativity
didn't ask+L ratio+you fell off+yb better
dont post ur negativity idc about your opinion

WetCrustytenticle:

@krissy525 wrote:
@wetcrustytenticle wrote:
@krissy525 wrote:
@wetcrustytenticle wrote:
i dont like it
i dont need your negativity
didn't ask+L ratio+you fell off+yb better
dont post ur negativity idc about your opinion
didn't ask+L ratio+you fell off+yb better

bizaardvark:

dang it slaps good job <3

Krissy525:

@bizaardvark wrote:
dang it slaps good job <3
thank you

DADDYROXY:

@yrj8498 wrote:
@krissy525 wrote:
@daddyroxy wrote:
Good job <3
thank you
fire!!
Yuhhh

DADDYROXY:

And np bruh

autumnp:

loved it good jod u did great🙂

Krissy525:

@autumnp wrote:
loved it good jod u did great🙂
thank you, nice pfp btw

Aboveusonlysky52:

@krissy525 wrote:
@wetcrustytenticle wrote:
i dont like it
i dont need your negativity
if u dont like it then why are u commenting on it

Krissy525:

@aboveusonlysky52 wrote:
@krissy525 wrote:
@wetcrustytenticle wrote:
i dont like it
i dont need your negativity
if u dont like it then why are u commenting on it
my words exactly

Zayne2001:

Yo sis you did great

Krissy525:

@zayne2001 wrote:
Yo sis you did great
thanks bro

Zayne2001:

np sista anytime

Riah1:

This is absolutely amazing!! I love this<3 <3 Keep it up!!

Krissy525:

@riah1 wrote:
This is absolutely amazing!! I love this<3 <3 Keep it up!!
thnx

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