Question

How do this rap sound
i have alot of friends but i am the only one that tan,and i am chill like a fan and i only have one man friend but we all have beef but at the end of the day they still love me, so they are my secret key but at the end of that day you can treat me how you wanna be, but you cant be like me so when u ready to talk come to me so i am just flowing like a tree

Answer 1

It might suck but i tried

Answer 2

OMGGGGGGGG That soooo good, you made it up?

Answer 3

yes

Answer 4

but i was scared to post it
bc it not good

Answer 5

Don't worry girl! this shows improvement and that you will get better! I know it because it's kinda the same thing for me but more with singing. I even have song lyrics that I posted if you want an inspiration! <3

Answer 6

Hi it is me and i am 17.

Answer 7

yes

Answer 8

good job :)

Answer 9

thx guys