guilty of our grief
shameful for our decision
gazing in disbelief
when your future has no vision
hand off the trigger
body coursing with anxiety and rigor
thus begins the birth of a scourge
from within, true chaos shall emerge

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Chloeisdum · Answer

OMg i love the tention in it, this is perfect!

iFish · Answer

Yeah, I do like the tension it has, it seems sort of depressing with some type of demand.
I like it!

selenass · Answer

if this is a iambic pentameter u messed up on line 5 and 6 but it is nice