Question

Calling me lame?
I can bust out into flames
So people enjoy your game
And so thats why i came


You think your entertaining?
well your not training
i will be the person claiming
while you would be declaiming


Think this isnt fair?
Well you cant even share
while i care
you always stare



Today is your day
to literally say no way
i might be left with nothing to say
but you have nothing to pay


Think your so cool?
why,you just look like a fool
You are so cruel
even in school

Answer 1

So this was a assignment for my school,they told us to write a poem for if someone was being rude,mean or cruel.Do yall like mine?

Answer 2

to be real i was gonna say its garbage until i saw that it was for school, its actually pretty good for a school assignment

Answer 3

it's pretty good for a school assignment, i'd love to see the other students trying this LMAOO

Answer 4

It's really good, it sounds a little like an NEFFEX song. I think you did a really good job 👍

Answer 5

Great job! it's really good, but i think you can use some words a little bit better. I could tell you just wanted the things to rhyme instead of wanting them to make sense in your poem, but good job.

Answer 6

This looks really good. Amazing talent!!

Answer 7

8 / 10