Question

Don't Care

I don't care what people say
Imma do it anyway
I am on the low
Drinking from a cup

People thinkin' I'm messed up
Sit down, take a look
From the ally
These trials are killin' me softly

People say I need to rhyme less
So I will do that
People say I am a mess
I guess I am just that
But I bounce back

When I go far, don't try to call
Forget the past
When I am the greatest of them all
And yo go crash

LMAO i ain't gonna quit

Answer 1

Did you write this?

Answer 2

yes.

Answer 3

Its good.

Answer 4

I really like it good job. :)

Answer 5

Nice its good. Fight back nicely.

Answer 6

yeee buddy

Answer 7

tet i know u gonna say im doodoo LMAO

Answer 8

nah its a bit better than the other ones

Answer 9

i cut on the rhymes

Answer 10

yea i didnt mean it like that tho

Answer 11

i agree

Answer 12

but maybe i should have not spaced stuff that much though

Answer 13

last time you made it look like a poem
you did

"im hurt i dont know who to call"
"little do they know im boutta fall"
"maybe at the end of the hall"

Answer 14

Good Sh!t man

Answer 15

you didnt do that exactly but in different words

Answer 16

you made it rhyme way too much without seperating it

Answer 17

i can see maybe 2 or 3 lines but the whole thing isa big nono

Answer 18

even if you look at the people you listen 2 rn they dont do that

Answer 19

your doing good just remember this is not a put down just some advice

Answer 20

I'm kinda getting mad at you tet....please stop responding to this. your blowing me up

Answer 21

lmao

Answer 22

or idk if plot is the right word but something that makes sense

Answer 23

or topic

Answer 24

HOW DO I TURN OFF NOTFICATIONS FOR REPLYS

Answer 25

exactly

Answer 26

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