Question

I am writing a song, and I want to know if this is a good verse to start with

I want to be accepted, but all I get is rejection. I get made fun of for being emo, I am not emo, and people need to get a higher ego.


That is it so far, but I am wondering if I jumped into the chorus to fast, tell me what you think!

Answer 1

It is i like it can I make the song with you ill have to go sleep but ill write sum verses on a page and send it to you

Answer 2

That would be awesome

Answer 3

I can help you as well, but I won't be on all the time. We can work on a doc together

Answer 4

I like it very much can't wait to see what u have in store

Answer 5

ITS SOOOO GOOODDDD!! and gurl if anyone gets called emo its me TwT

Answer 6

cool

Answer 7

my song Scars and tattoos, got 'em head to toe
I was born to raise hell, 'til it's time to go
Never fear another man, never ran from a problem
Then my daddy wasn't there, momma didn't raise a coward
Weathered every storm, rain, sleet, hail, snow, hell no
No retreat, I don't eat, this is what I stand for
Stand up, man up, we can throw them hands
Even prison couldn't change me, I ain't scared to go back
That's a known fact, wanna scrap, face me if you do
Think you put me in my grave, well you a daisy if you do
And if you do, bad motherPieer, put that on my tombstone
But that'll be a cold day in hell, boy I'm too strong
Boots on, wanna see the bottom of 'em, say somethin'
Paid for us sinners, Lord knows everyday it's somethin'
Trials but I persevere, through hard work and drinkin' beer
So I ain't trying to hear that Pie, Pie I'm workin' here
It's been a long day and I ain't done yet
And all I know is come and get you some
I learned the hard way, I did it my way
But like they say, boy life goes on
It's been a long day and I ain't done yet
And all I know is come and get you some
I learned the hard way, I did it my way
But like they say, boy life goes on
On and on and on I'm gettin' up another mornin'
Another day, another dollar, work my hands off to the bone
Bartender pour another round, I'm just tryna ease the pain
'Fore I'm headed back home
Still got dirt all in my hands
Workin' hard trying to make it
What don't kill you make you stronger
If it don't then it'll break ya
Take you out like trash, just that fast
Life can put you on your Pie
I'm cut from a different cloth
But you wouldn't know about that
(Boy)
They don't know Pie about a hard life
(Boy)
They don't know Pie about no hard times
(Boy)
Learn the hard way now I'm right or wrong
(Boy)
I guess it's like they say, boy life goes on
It's been a long day and I ain't done yet
And all I know is come and get you some
I learned the hard way, I did it my way
But like they say, boy life goes on
It's been a long day and I ain't done yet
And all I know is come and get you some
I learned the hard way, I did it my way
But like they say, boy life goes on

Answer 8

Thats awesome

Answer 9

First off Bestie Liam POP OFF KING...and rayne i'll talk to u at school bout that song

Answer 10

this is nice. i like how you can feel the emotions of this verse.

Answer 11

Thank you.

Answer 12

ok

Answer 13

Not bad tbh

Answer 14

I like it very much

Answer 15

I am working on more lyrics rn. I think that it will turn out good. One day at a time.

Answer 16

ate

Answer 17

my nuts itch

Answer 18

👍 👍 👍 👍

Answer 19

um what did i- nvm