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chrisdjackson:

Rate these lyrics for me

chrisdjackson:

As we go on We were meant to know each other You were always like my brother We always just had them crazy moments When we stole the candy out the basket Then we had to go into a forum, it was tragic That was kinda hurtful, I’m not gonna lie Remember we use to sneak out the class, we tried to hide You tore your paper up in detention, I almost died Somebody run up on us, we guaranteed to fight Remember at the lunch table, we always throwin food, uhh You threw a piece of cheese and it landed on Mr. Lue, ha Remember when I was 3 and you was just only two, uhh We dreamed of being astronauts, and then we both grew

YRJ8498:

Fire ngl

Questionnare:

nice

Cutie728:

I like it

kaleighh533:

sheeshhh man got bars nice

Cutie728:

@kaleighh533 wrote:
sheeshhh man got bars nice
fr

chrisdjackson:

No Kizzy

Cutie728:

idk what im doing. lmao tryin to act cool XD

chrisdjackson:

Lol

link1234:

ight it cool

chrisdjackson:

@link1234 wrote:
ight it cool
Yh ik

dman4444:

nice

link1234:

@chrisdjackson wrote:
@link1234 wrote:
ight it cool
Yh ik
lol

chrisdjackson:

NIICE

chrisdjackson:

I stay on top... pause.

AlexaJenkins:

Its honest and really sweet, i love it <3

johnreeves:

nice yo

chrisdjackson:

@alexajenkins wrote:
Its honest and really sweet, i love it <3
yh ik

Cutie728:

It hit different honestly. Its true too

chrisdjackson:

No kizzy

Krissy525:

@chrisdjackson wrote:
As we go on We were meant to know each other You were always like my brother We always just had them crazy moments When we stole the candy out the basket Then we had to go into a forum, it was tragic That was kinda hurtful, I’m not gonna lie Remember we use to sneak out the class, we tried to hide You tore your paper up in detention, I almost died Somebody run up on us, we guaranteed to fight Remember at the lunch table, we always throwin food, uhh You threw a piece of cheese and it landed on Mr. Lue, ha Remember when I was 3 and you was just only two, uhh We dreamed of being astronauts, and then we both grew
its amazing cant wait to see more of your work

P1n3appl31:

that is good

oopdontknowher:

be fireeee tho sheesh

6ix9lne:

its good keep it up

6ix9lne:

one day you could be like me

achaf0644:

yo sing it add a beat and that would be a really good song bro! 95/100

zippymusbe:

@chrisdjackson this meaningful no cap i love and u too bro :troll:

thatprettygirl:

its fye but i know what can make it even better

ILOVESPAGHETTI:

super good.

Ava1:

šŸ‘

Raynestorm:

Thats a 10/10. I really like it

summermorgan:

10/10

livin42:

very nice 100/10

Nathalie14:

"Remember when I was 3 and you was just only two, uhh We dreamed of being astronauts, and then we both grew" I like this part tbh 🐱.

meats0990:

thats mega lit

meats0990:

id but the album ngl

meats0990:

buy*

meats0990:

fire

cutebunny123:

@chrisdjackson wrote:
As we go on We were meant to know each other You were always like my brother We always just had them crazy moments When we stole the candy out the basket Then we had to go into a forum, it was tragic That was kinda hurtful, I’m not gonna lie Remember we use to sneak out the class, we tried to hide You tore your paper up in detention, I almost died Somebody run up on us, we guaranteed to fight Remember at the lunch table, we always throwin food, uhh You threw a piece of cheese and it landed on Mr. Lue, ha Remember when I was 3 and you was just only two, uhh We dreamed of being astronauts, and then we both grew
I love it, it's awsome!

chrisdjackson:

Thanks

XxAngelkittenxX:

great job

byakuyatogami1234:

noice

achaf0644:

@byakuyatogami1234 wrote:
noice
haha agreed lol

lilbxbyyy:

nice

Monicaiswriting246:

yo i rly like the last verse, fire bro

Ava1:

šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘

4479:

6 / 10

kaciecowee25:

Solid 9/10.

maths89898:

7/10

Alex1513:

9/10 it was great keep going

QueenNiyah:

111000000000/10

QueenNiyah:

GOOODDD JOBBBBBBBBBBBB

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