Question

A short story i wrote based off of a prompt.
Prompt: Write the happiest scene you can but add a really messed up ending

Answer 1

As I stepped off the train I couldn't help but feel elated after all I was seeing you, I headed into the station, and I looked around eagerly and I suddenly saw you. You beautiful you waiting there for me I excitedly run over to you watching as you start smiling as I run into your arms mine wrapping around your back I look at you and I take it in your smell, your smile, your hair, your beautiful beautiful green eyes and every little freckle on your face and then I suddenly feel you jolt forward a look of shock and sadness covers your face as a little gasp of pain escapes from your lips, and as I back away letting you fall, I see a knife buried directly in the middle of your chest piercing through your heart a quick death but not instant. I sat down and took one last look at you whispering, “I’m sorry it had to be this way I loved you I truly did” at you with tears in my eyes. After a moment I gave her one final kiss and I wiped my tears away as I was walking away. I noticed something shiny on her neck and I realized it was a necklace. I bent down and took the necklace you were wearing before standing up. walking out of the train station and thinking, I'm doing this for us. I promise you wouldn't have wanted to see what our world has turned into. It's for the better. with a sad pit of regret in my stomach I walk out of the station repeating to myself, it’s for the better.

Answer 2

This is really detailed and good. Nice job. :)

Answer 3

Good job 👌 I like it ☺️

Answer 4

interesting story: ).