Question

So, After the... positive responses on my first poem posted, I wanted to write one for my best friend. Tell me what you think, be honest.




















When I feel broken,
And only feel pain,
You come to my side,
And say “You are perfect, Rayne”
I don’t deserve
A friend like you
One that pulls me
Through and through
When my life gets hectic
And I feel like I am gonna blow
You are there in a call
And you help me grow
When I argue with my parents,
Or lose a friend,
Or fail a test,
You are with me to the end.
And Even though I am going to move,
You are going to be my best friend,
And hard -ships and fights may come
I will still hold onto you, until the very end.
Because,
(Her name)
You are my best friend, and more
You feel like my family.
Thank you for that
Thank you for you
Thank you for everything
Thank you for choosing me to be your friend
Thank you for being you
And thank you for being there for me.
And helping me mend.

Thank you

Answer 1

This is awesome even I felt your emotions this is wonderful your friend is gonna definitely love it. Made me wish to be your best friend

Answer 2

which best friend?

Answer 3

Whoever the poem is for

Answer 4

l love it i felt your emotions

Answer 5

Thank you :)

Answer 6

awww shes so lucky to have a person like you this is amazing <8!!

Answer 7

this is gooddd <3

Answer 8

keep up the good work

Answer 9

lol u better

Answer 10

good job

Answer 11

nice job ;o

Answer 12

whos the best friend?

Answer 13

I will tell u later

Answer 14

I am in tears Rayne, this is so beautiful. I know she'll love it. Keep it up!

Answer 15

I love it!!

Answer 16

Good Job!

Answer 17

this is amazing.
it hit me very hard.

Answer 18

i love it 10/10 for you

Answer 19

Good Job!

Answer 20

Nice