Question

Here is some lyrics:


When will I be able to breathe?
When it makes someone happy?
Someone won't be able to handle it
So I'll wait

Wait for them to start caring
It seems like whenever someone's alive someone won't care
Yet when they die they all bow down and feel guilty for not caring for them

Guilt, the feeling we all feel
All for different reasons
For me, well because I missed you and I shouldn't

Answer 1

good job :D i like them

Answer 2

Tysm!

Answer 3

thats really good keep going :p

Answer 4

this is good! despite it being short, you can definitely feel the emotion <3

Answer 5

These are very good lyrics if you had a good rhythm to the song it would be even more amazing great job!

Answer 6

i like

Answer 7

good job and to get your mind off who ever your trying to get off your mind you and i could o on a date or a something like that

Answer 8

there great keep doing good are the hard work

Answer 9

this gives me really deep emotional thoughts when i read this but good job to be honest i love it an its great

Answer 10

👍👍👍👍

Answer 11

👍 👍 👍

Answer 12

That good

Answer 13

u just inspire me to finish my poem for my class

Answer 14

cooooooool

Answer 15

Good job

Answer 16

Ty peoples. And u should finish ur poem