Question

“Eyes”



The pain in my eyes it was real,

I just needed love,

I feel like you played with my heart,

You knew that would tear me apart,

I gave you my love and affection,

You gave me your drugs and depression,

I thought we had a connection,

i guess she was a better selection,

Tried to be your perfection,

It was always her choice to have your affection,

In the eyes her perfection,

Was I always your choice of depression?

Did you come across some way to be her new perfection?

How was the eyes of affection?

Depression was the key to your perfection,

Needed a section,

Needed a new perfection,

Couldn’t be your perfection,

Why the addition,

Why the lies,

Why the key to the eyes of my perfection,

You played the games and lost your perfection..

Answer 1

It's okay but I see the same words for rhyming, perfection, section/selection, affection, connection, addition. They all rhyme with ion which makes it seem like your kind of speaking the same thing over and over again.