wrote a poem what ya'll think,
Depression

Happy, sad, confused
Confused, sad, happy
Dark, moody, sad
Hatred, lonely, confused
Joy, happiness, uplifted

Confusing, illusions, madness
Therapy, medication, doctor
Madness, suffering, numb
Pills, alcohol, drugs
Addiction, therapy, relapse

Anxiety, self-harm, pain
Self-harm, pain, death
Pain, death, suffering
Suffering, sadness, selfishness
Selfishness, sadness, suicide

Question

wrote a poem what ya'll think,
Depression

Happy, sad, confused
Confused, sad, happy
Dark, moody, sad
Hatred, lonely, confused
Joy, happiness, uplifted

Confusing, illusions, madness
Therapy, medication, doctor
Madness, suffering, numb
Pills, alcohol, drugs
Addiction, therapy, relapse

Anxiety, self-harm, pain
Self-harm, pain, death
Pain, death, suffering 
Suffering, sadness, selfishness
Selfishness, sadness, suicide

XxAceyxX · Answer

you did good on it i like it alot your good at doing poems!

Hobo2004 · Answer

not exactly a poem, more like a jumble of words describing depression
not bad

Krissy525 · Answer

I like it. Keep it up! I would love to see more of your work!

chrisdjackson · Answer

To be honest... sounds like juice wrld to me

YRJ8498 · Answer

It's not a poem its just words of how I felt when the Bengals lost by 3 points in the superbowl.

Hobo2004 · Answer

more like a cycle of depression

chrisdjackson · Answer

@yrj8498 wrote:

It's not a poem its just words of how I felt when the Bengals lost by 3 points in the superbowl.

Yo wth

LandonGoma · Answer

Um I think if you put my thought into it it'd be a lot better. but use those words and make a poem with what you feeling