Question

I got a new song!!! hope you like it...
Better:

I may be here
But thats my choice
I’d follow you anywhere
No matter the consequences
I know I know better
But don’t blame me
I may need more help than you do
Or not
Either way I’ll care for you more than I
Until I get my first scar
Why do we do this?
Why can’t we all just be friends?

The worst part is that we need to improve
We are all just lonely humans
We all wish luck to one another
May need time but its all trust
Don’t stab my back and I won’t stab yours
A deal is a deal
I know you need this
Filled with betrayal just to do it to another
I know I know I know
We can do better

(whoa-oh)
(whoa-oh)
(oh oh oh oh oh oh oh)

Nose runny yet with lies?
Here for the truth not to deny
I can feel you there
Read what you think
I know what you know
See what you see
All of it is just another perspective to watch
Another to wish the best for
Hold on tighter just to see you hold on
I may be kind but that doesn’t mean you are too
You need a little help
I’m here for you just ask
All I ask is no stab in the back more weight to hold

The worst part is that we need to improve
We are all just lonely humans
We all wish luck to another
May need time but its trust
Don’t stab my back and I won’t stab yours
A deal is a deal
I know you need this
Filled with betrayal and sorrow just to do it to another
I know I know I know
We can do better

(whoa-oh)
(whoa-oh)
(oh oh oh oh oh oh oh)

Yeah we can do better

Answer 1

@laylasnii13 You're gonna wanna see this

Answer 2

Nice song. i like it. the last step is you sing :)

Answer 3

Good job! These lyrics are really good, your very talented :D

Answer 4

i love this!!! the part were you say "Nose runny yet with lies" i love ittttttt good job cant wait to see more from you (:

Answer 5

I thank you all! <3