Question

Hellooooo I finally have pt 2 of my song/ poem if you haven't read the first one then it should be in the closed posts but anyways here is my poem...
"Times were getting tougher, the world was becoming rougher, I didn't know where I would be in life until I looked into your eyes".
"You opened my heart, and there I saw a spark, you pushed my limits and now things are different".
"Please stay with me, you are my infinity, I feel so loved, I could fly like a dove".

Answer 1

I like this one better then pt 1 tbh..

Answer 2

I like both of them c:

Answer 3

I like the rhymes! Especially because they make sense xd

good job!

Answer 4

i love how at the end you said "I feel so loved, i could fly like a dove" that made me think that you love them so much you would be willing to take the higher limits with that an thats just amazingggg i love it (:

Answer 5

I love it : )

Answer 6

tysm!!

Answer 7

I hope to have a pt 3 soon!

Answer 8

no capp this poem is Toast just stop you bicth

Answer 9

this shii is axx no capp

Answer 10

you funny

Answer 11

I love it very much !!

Answer 12

tyy

Answer 13

You did great, on both. Keep going!

Answer 14

very good I would publish it if I was u but keep up the good work