Question

Wrote a poem what ya'll think.
I don’t understand
Why people spend their days playing video games
Why children are mean
Why teens worry about what others think
why social media is so popular
But most of all
Why people are so judgmental
Why some die young
Why parents ignore their children
Why the most innocent become victims
What I understand most is
Mothers love
Fathers protection
Why siblings are protective.

Answer 1

It's very nice but maybe get a little more creative with your wording?

Answer 2

something like this maybe

Answer 3

I don't get it.
Why do people waste their time playing video games?
Why are children mean?
Why do teenagers care what others think?
Why is social media so popular?
Most importantly, why are people so judgmental?
Why do some people die at a young age? Why do some parents ignore their children?
Why do the most innocent people become victims?
What I am most aware of is mothers' love and fathers' protection.
Why are siblings protective?

Answer 4

👍

Answer 5

thats really good

Answer 6

its more of a free verse poem, food though

Answer 7

Great poem, but like someone said just a little more creative.