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cutebunny123:

Could you rate this lyrics from 0-10 plz be honest Go to obbama With your mama Make some drama Don't forget your pajam

vybez:

if i rate it will you give me a medal ?

cutebunny123:

@vybez yeah, why not

vybez:

@cutebunny123 wrote:
@vybez yeah, why not
ok its 10/10 very creative

cutebunny123:

@vybez THANKS!

vybez:

yw

MASTERKIY:

its something, doesnt make sense tho lol but atleast it rhymes

XLynx:

brilliant, absolutely brilliant. chef’s kiss. mwah.

SweetKai:

Doesnt really make sense

XLynx:

@sweetkai wrote:
Doesnt really make sense
that’s absolutely false, this is a literal masterpiece. imma hang this in my room

Ferrari:

huh what in the world is this 2/10 ur not bad at rhyming but the lyrics make no sense at all

ZoeCatLover:

okay ngl thats kinda lame but good job with he rhyming ig

kaciecowee25:

5/10.

TheOgAccount:

8/10 for creativity

XLynx:

Okay, I'm going to get non-satirical for a second. Try to rhyme and make sense.

joderamor:

confusing but i like it 10/10

TETSXPREME:

true talent right here

cutebunny123:

@xlynx You made my day, thanks

itsmehjay:

honestly i dont get the point of this but I give u 2/10 for trying lmao

LandonGoma:

There awesome but you should put more but keep up the great work

Alexandralol:

Uhh, honestly it's kinda cringey but funny. Good effort.

Alexandralol:

Soo 1/10

cutebunny123:

@alexandralol thanks for rating and being honest I will work on it this is my first one only so.. that prob why

cutebunny123:

@MASTERKIY I'm working on fixing it

cutebunny123:

@SweetKai I'm adding a new phrase soon

Ferrari:

just keep going I kinda understand it the rhyming is alright try looking at me or @RodWav3 's raps.

cutebunny123:

@ferrari soon I will but the new phrase in here and I will see what people think about it

cutebunny123:

@itsmehjay I'm working on a with adding one more phrase on it

cutebunny123:

@tetsxpreme thanks

cutebunny123:

@landongoma adding one more pharse soon

cutebunny123:

@joderamor thanks for rating

cutebunny123:

@theogaccount THANKS!

cutebunny123:

@ZoeCatLover appericate it

Scorpion13:

Lmao sick

cutebunny123:

@scorpion13 thanks btw love ur pfp

Scorpion13:

@cutebunny123 thank u

cutebunny123:

Here's the new one just add one thing rate it from 0-10 and be honest and plz let me know if its better than the first one I did (Slama means hello in arabic) Salam llama Go to obbama With your pajam Make some drama AND Don't forget your mama

Ferrari:

3.5/10 a tiny bit better but I still don't really understand it try adding more story/facts in your rap songs.

cutebunny123:

@ferrari okay

Ferrari:

its at least decent though

Scorpion13:

Lmaoo both 10

cutebunny123:

@scorpion13 tysm

UrHawtieIsHere4U:

10/10I thought that this was hilarious.

LazerHubs:

6.5/10

NoodlesAndRiceYT:

very...interesting. I rate it a 7/10 for its creativity, and funniness, and how random it is.

cutebunny123:

@urhawtieishere4u when I read your text it made me laugh idk why

cutebunny123:

@noodlesandriceyt thanks

cutebunny123:

@LazerHubs thanks

sciencegirl:

Its nice! But what is the drama part?

cutebunny123:

@sciencegirl thanks and I will private text

KarlJacobs:

i love the creativity with the rhyming 5/10!!

cutebunny123:

@karljacobs : )

UrHawtieIsHere4U:

@cutebunny123 lmao may I copy this?

Void13:

so inspirational man u said it all

CKB:

so moving

CYBER257:

It's alright ig

cutebunny123:

@urhawtieishere4u ofc

UrHawtieIsHere4U:

@cutebunny123 K thanks, gonna send this to meh hater<3

cutebunny123:

@cyber257 thx

cutebunny123:

@urhawtieishere4u mhm

cutebunny123:

@ckb thanks

cutebunny123:

@void13 apprericate it

LandonGoma:

I SEE YOU CAN'T SAY THANK YOU TO ME BUT TO EVERYONE ELSE

hamidiso23:

this is so fire im adding to my playlist rn

LandonGoma:

BRUUH I STILL DONT GET A THANK YOU LANDON

Raynestorm:

Lyrics don rly make sense but....... 4/10, cuz it is creative.

cutebunny123:

@landongoma thanks for the advice

cutebunny123:

@raynestorm thank u for rating

cutebunny123:

@hamidiso23 you made me smile

YRJ8498:

gotta say sum, you spelled Obama wrong (How when he was a president that made history) and this line here ----> "Don't forget your pajam"<


I think it is missing an A it also makes no sense everyone telling you it's creative but it's not, it's something a simpleton or a kindergartner would write so I would give a 1/10 and remember you typed these words, " 0-10 plz be honest"

LandonGoma:

@cutebunny123 wrote:
@landongoma thanks for the advice
yeah your welcome

Emilee77:

honestly? its a 4....work on the words they are kind of childish

Raynestorm:

@cutebunny123 wrote:
@raynestorm thank u for rating
Yea, I think with the creativity, you could make something a little better.

cutebunny123:

@raynestorm im thnking of a new one

cutebunny123:

@yrj8498 okay

cutebunny123:

@emilee77 sounds good

aldyn:

it's good

anthony5012005:

very good 10/10

YRJ8498:

@anthony5012005 wrote:
very good 10/10
This is a cap please be honest she cannot look at the mistakes and learn and get better if you guys tell her the bad things she writes is good

anthony5012005:

@yrj8498 wrote:
@anthony5012005 wrote:
very good 10/10
This is a cap please be honest she cannot look at the mistakes and learn and get better if you guys tell her the bad things she writes is good
u have to give her credit it takes a lot of guts to do what she did so I give her 10/10 for bravery and 10/10 for creativity

FrogGirlEmmy:

uhm, 2, its very short, doesnt match up. but good effort thus the 2/10, but make it longer, and uhm.. yeah.

YRJ8498:

@anthony5012005 wrote:
@yrj8498 wrote:
@anthony5012005 wrote:
very good 10/10
This is a cap please be honest she cannot look at the mistakes and learn and get better if you guys tell her the bad things she writes is good
u have to give her credit it takes a lot of guts to do what she did so I give her 10/10 for bravery and 10/10 for creativity
that may be true but she didn't ask to rate her bravery she asked us to rate her lyrics and to be honest

aldyn:

same 10/10

FrogGirlEmmy:

@vybez wrote:
if i rate it will you give me a medal ?
btw, no beggin 4 medals :3

vybez:

@froggirlemmy wrote:
@vybez wrote:
if i rate it will you give me a medal ?
btw, no beggin 4 medals :3
i wasnt begging . i simply asked & she said yes i wasnt hoping for her to actually give me one

FrogGirlEmmy:

@vybez wrote:
@froggirlemmy wrote:
@vybez wrote:
if i rate it will you give me a medal ?
btw, no beggin 4 medals :3
i wasnt begging . i simply asked & she said yes i wasnt hoping for her to actually give me one
ur still asking for a medal, sadly thats not aloud.

axie:

"Go to obama Go with your mama Make up some drama Remember the pajama's" Drown in this trama Im sorry mama didn't hit that sorry flows back wish i was taller wish i was baller who knew you do all of this problem yeah flow switch dig ditch bury body witness no one no help some one don't tell in the night hear you sigh till i pass out human race hiding in the glass house the thought of you is haungting i know i replay them i don't know when ill go home im losing oh no send me the photo yeah baby lets go im tired of the dissing can we just all be friends no one asked what color you are shut the heck up about your skin their is only one race what nation your from depends don't ask me for money im struggling just like you Yeah shoot an arrow in my heart not the bullet in my head

axie:

sorry, decided to have sum fun wit it

vybez:

@froggirlemmy wrote:
@vybez wrote:
@froggirlemmy wrote:
@vybez wrote:
if i rate it will you give me a medal ?
btw, no beggin 4 medals :3
i wasnt begging . i simply asked & she said yes i wasnt hoping for her to actually give me one
ur still asking for a medal, sadly thats not aloud.
she still gave it tho lol

FrogGirlEmmy:

@axie wrote:
sorry, decided to have sum fun wit it
woahhhhh thats goooood

cutebunny123:

@froggirlemmy tysm

Luka:

sheeeeesh

Luka:

"Go to obama Go with your mama Make up some drama Remember the pajama's" Drown in this trama Im sorry mama didn't hit that sorry flows back wish i was taller wish i was baller who knew you do all of this problem yeah flow switch dig ditch bury body witness no one no help some one don't tell in the night hear you sigh till i pass out human race hiding in the glass house the thought of you is haungting i know i replay them i don't know when ill go home im losing oh no send me the photo yeah baby lets go im tired of the dissing can we just all be friends no one asked what color you are shut the heck up about your skin their is only one race what nation your from depends don't ask me for money im struggling just like you Yeah shoot an arrow in my heart not the bullet in my head

Luka:

I like it

jeanice23:

love it

cutebunny123:

@luka ty

cutebunny123:

@jeanice23 appeicate it

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