This is my ending for the story I've been writing how does it look???

And so the story ended where it began; back at the house.
I open the door and look around then back at her and put a finger to my lips. She nods. Funny. I didn’t really miss this house. It’s been 3 years since I ran away. The place changed a lot. I put my bag down on the ground next to the door and she puts hers next to mine. I just then noticed that the door was unlocked. Hm. Were they waiting for me to come back all this long? Definitely not. It’s been 3 years for God’s sake.
Maybe Mom isn’t home yet or Mandy, heck, or Sadie. I wonder if Sadie moved out yet. I wonder if Mandy moved into my room. I take a deep breath. “MOM! I’m home!”

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This is my ending for the story I've been writing how does it look???

And so the story ended where it began; back at the house. 
      I open the door and look around then back at her and put a finger to my lips. She nods. Funny. I didn’t really miss this house. It’s been 3 years since I ran away. The place changed a lot. I put my bag down on the ground next to the door and she puts hers next to mine. I just then noticed that the door was unlocked. Hm. Were they waiting for me to come back all this long? Definitely not. It’s been 3 years for God’s sake. 
      Maybe Mom isn’t home yet or Mandy, heck, or Sadie. I wonder if Sadie moved out yet. I wonder if Mandy moved into my room. I take a deep breath. “MOM! I’m home!”