Question

getting back into songwriting finally so here we go


just wanna run off home with you
promise that all you say is true
you keep me from my hurt
and i love the way you work

we'll be forever because you’re my lifeline
i don’t get many things right the first time
but in that moment i felt this was right
i’m holding on to you until i leave this life
i mean forever and always til i die

love the way you make me crazy
you’re the one constant, never fading
we might have difficulty forgetting the past
but i hope you know that i only want this to last

so we'll be forever because i'm selfish
when it comes to you, i just can’t help it
you’re all i have that i cannot lose
i may have ‘options’, but i just want you

- allyy

Answer 1

it is verryy niceee 10/10 <3

Answer 2

AWWWWWW thats sweet I absolutely LOVE it! <333333

Answer 3

ooh it's actually not cringey likes some ppls songs on here LOVE IT DARLING but i would change the "i love the way u work" idk why but sounds weird to me

Answer 4

thank you for actually giving me some constructive criticism! really does help

Answer 5

no problem! I like writing songs sometimes so I get it :p

Answer 6

very good I love it 10/10 keep up the good work

Answer 7

It is amazing<3

Answer 8

ye