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UrHawtieIsHere4U:

Poem time~ When will I be good enough for anyone? Unsecure about myself They all say it's not just about looks It’s about your heart What if, I have no heart? No feelings for anyone to observe, ruin This makes them feel as if he is just out of reach So close I can skim my fingertips along the surface of him, yet unable to grab ahold of him So close, yet so, so far away The demon inside my voice says, ‘He’ll never love you the way I do’ These thoughts overpower me Suffocating me, as if dragging out my last breath gives it power Power to see what’s in my heart Power to laugh at my doubts and fails Power to see that I'm not the one who he thought I was

Sailor:

This is both relatable and deep. Nice job.

UrHawtieIsHere4U:

@sailor wrote:
This is both relatable and deep. Nice job.
Thanks.

iloveyou69:

SO GOOD

UrHawtieIsHere4U:

@iloveyou69 wrote:
SO GOOD
Thank u!

aldyn:

good job

aldyn:

@iloveyou69 wrote:
SO GOOD
hi

aldyn:

it's really good

UrHawtieIsHere4U:

@aldyn wrote:
it's really good
Thanks.

aldyn:

np

Krissy525:

This is great!

kaciecowee25:

GREAT JOB.

UrHawtieIsHere4U:

Ty Kris! And Kacie

Krissy525:

@urhawtieishere4u wrote:
Ty Kris! And Kacie
np

Ava1:

good job

UrHawtieIsHere4U:

@ava1 wrote:
good job
Thanks

Ava1:

@urhawtieishere4u wrote:
@ava1 wrote:
good job
Thanks
gracias

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