this is a song i'm working on, its called "tired of your ****" still have lyrics to add and music but here's the first chorus ig ik it sounds so bad dw i'll fix it, maybe even give me some pointers https://voca.ro/11dJO5rpMWq5

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kaciecowee25 · Answer

Its terrible, thats all im gonna say.

KarlJacobs · Answer

@kaciecowee25 wrote:

Its terrible, thats all im gonna say.

ikr :D

kaciecowee25 · Answer

@karljacobs wrote:

@kaciecowee25 wrote:

Its terrible, thats all im gonna say.

ikr :D I'm kidding, lmao.

P1n3appl31 · Answer

Can you maybe type the lyrics for me? I can't listen at the moment but I would like to help.

KarlJacobs · Answer

@p1n3appl31 wrote:

Can you maybe type the lyrics for me? I can't listen at the moment but I would like to help.

Ofc lyrics: you say you never meant to hurt me but you did and you should feel dirty you should feel guilty you should feel bad but you won't and that makes me mad oh that makes me mad

P1n3appl31 · Answer

@karljacobs wrote:

@p1n3appl31 wrote:

Can you maybe type the lyrics for me? I can't listen at the moment but I would like to help.

Ofc lyrics: you say you never meant to hurt me but you did and you should feel dirty you should feel guilty you should feel bad but you won't and that makes me mad oh that makes me mad

Thats good! not bad and these words are coming from someone who also writes songs. <3

KarlJacobs · Answer

@p1n3appl31 wrote:

@karljacobs wrote:

@p1n3appl31 wrote:

Can you maybe type the lyrics for me? I can't listen at the moment but I would like to help.

Ofc lyrics: you say you never meant to hurt me but you did and you should feel dirty you should feel guilty you should feel bad but you won't and that makes me mad oh that makes me mad

Thats good! not bad and these words are coming from someone who also writes songs. <3

oh wow thanks a lot!!

P1n3appl31 · Answer

You're Welcome!

YooGirlAriel14 · Answer

I lowkey like it and this is coming from somebody who know how to write songs if u can rap i suggest u add a small rap in the middle and its gonna be fire

KarlJacobs · Answer

@yoogirlariel14 wrote:

I lowkey like it and this is coming from somebody who know how to write songs if u can rap i suggest u add a small rap in the middle and its gonna be fire

wait thats not a bad idea and tysm!!

iloveyou69 · Answer

it was really goood !

KarlJacobs · Answer

@iloveyou69 wrote:

it was really goood !

tysm!!!!

iloveyou69 · Answer

ywwww

liamoj69 · Answer

I wanna do a rap

liamoj69 · Answer

I can do one

liamoj69 · Answer

imma go do one

liamoj69 · Answer

ok im done

liamoj69 · Answer

here it is

liamoj69 · Answer

Let me get the gas quick
Pour it on this corny Apple rap Apple
Forty blast quick
Zip his Apple up in plastic
'Bout to get smacked like you texting in traffic
Dudes I'm with are ruthless savage
You are more into news and fashion
Looking stupid for views you acting
Wearing dresses and goofy hats
Man I see you in public I'm whooping your Apple
Apple stay loaded you know & I'm ready
Got a big 4 4 and that Apple talk heavy
With that Pablo flow sitting low in the Chevy
Hit the gas real fast they ain't never gonna catch me
Slide so fast you ain't never gonna catch me
Got a blicky in the dash and the cash on hefty
Put my city on the map like I opened up the levy
Put the fifty in the mag like I'm opened up and ready

liamoj69 · Answer

It got rid of the cuss words

KarlJacobs · Answer

@liamoj69 wrote:

Let me get the gas quick Pour it on this corny Apple rap Apple Forty blast quick Zip his Apple up in plastic 'Bout to get smacked like you texting in traffic Dudes I'm with are ruthless savage You are more into news and fashion Looking stupid for views you acting Wearing dresses and goofy hats Man I see you in public I'm whooping your Apple Apple stay loaded you know & I'm ready Got a big 4 4 and that Apple talk heavy With that Pablo flow sitting low in the Chevy Hit the gas real fast they ain't never gonna catch me Slide so fast you ain't never gonna catch me Got a blicky in the dash and the cash on hefty Put my city on the map like I opened up the levy Put the fifty in the mag like I'm opened up and ready

wait bc this rlly good ngl

liamoj69 · Answer

thanks Im still working on other things

liamoj69 · Answer

every time it says apple its a bad word