Question

Poem
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I look around but nobody is there,,
i wonder in my head does anyone care
its a bright starry night
not a person in sight.

Its the next day,,
the rain is pouring away
tears are running from my eyes
i really dont know what to say.

Feeling as lonely as ever
i think to myself "will this last forever" 🥹
all i want to do is cry
its time i say my final goodbye.

I look down and see the city lights
lord i thank you for this amazing life

the end ? :)

Answer 1

this took like 30 minutes but i wanna try real writing cuz i feel like i would be good at it do you thing so ? honest opinion

Answer 2

Good job.

Answer 3

thank yuuu

Answer 4

Nice rhyme scheme, if you did more lines, it'd be a good song<3 and go for writing 'real' things

Answer 5

This is very good, one of the first I've seen on this app that someone actually rhymed pretty well.

Answer 6

good job

Answer 7

i like this a lot!

Answer 8

thank you guys so muchhh

Answer 9

it's nicely made, good job :)

Answer 10

👍 👍 👍 👍

Answer 11

10/10

Answer 12

I love this sm

Answer 13

Good Job