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cutebunny123:

Love (poem) Rate this from 0-10 (be HONEST) Love is not about money Love is not about wasting your time It's all about LOVE and REALTIONSHIP One day you will have the right one Patience is the key You are always loved by someone If you need anything, I'm here for you If your sad don't hate your self, love your self Even if someone is being mean to you or bullying you that means there JEALOUS of you You are always beautiful. If you say your ugly that means your the oppsite of it. Not a second goes by, I can't stop thinking of those people who need help If you need help with anything just text me. I try my best to be the nicest person I can be I try my hardest to make someone happpy. If you see anyone sad or mad or even have a hurt feelings please try to make them feel better. I hope you have a wonderful week. Thank you so much for reading this.

anthony5012005:

very good 10/10

cutebunny123:

@anthony5012005 Thank you!

TETSXPREME:

nice i like it

anthony5012005:

@cutebunny123 wrote:
@anthony5012005 Thank you!
yw

cutebunny123:

@tetsxpreme Appericate it

TheOgAccount:

I like the themes present in the poem but honestly, there are too many and they kind of clash. You go from third person to first person halfway through the poem too wich gets confusing. 6/10 It's a great start keep trying! <3

iloveubri:

THIS RAP IS STRAIGHT TRASH TBH MY DOG CAN DO BETTER

ShadowOfDeath:

Not a bad poem. But I have to agree with OgAccount.

ShadowOfDeath:

@iloveubri wrote:
THIS RAP IS STRAIGHT TRASH TBH MY DOG CAN DO BETTER
Silence.

iloveubri:

@shadowofdeath wrote:
@iloveubri wrote:
THIS RAP IS STRAIGHT TRASH TBH MY DOG CAN DO BETTER
Silence.
OR WHAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

ShadowOfDeath:

@iloveubri wrote:
@shadowofdeath wrote:
@iloveubri wrote:
THIS RAP IS STRAIGHT TRASH TBH MY DOG CAN DO BETTER
Silence.
OR WHAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I'll report you for disrespect.

iloveubri:

@shadowofdeath wrote:
@iloveubri wrote:
@shadowofdeath wrote:
@iloveubri wrote:
THIS RAP IS STRAIGHT TRASH TBH MY DOG CAN DO BETTER
Silence.
OR WHAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I'll report you for disrespect.
IDC!!!!!!!!

BADKARMA88:

I will give it a 100/10 because I think it is really good

ShadowOfDeath:

@iloveubri wrote:
@shadowofdeath wrote:
@iloveubri wrote:
@shadowofdeath wrote:
@iloveubri wrote:
THIS RAP IS STRAIGHT TRASH TBH MY DOG CAN DO BETTER
Silence.
OR WHAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I'll report you for disrespect.
IDC!!!!!!!!
I'm done fighting you about this. I'll take it to dms if I have to.

iloveubri:

@badkarma88 wrote:
I will give it a 100/10 because I think it is really good
THIS POEM IS STRAIGHT GARBAGE

YRJ8498:

"I try my hardest to make someone happpy." three p's but other than that it is good

iloveubri:

@shadowofdeath wrote:
@iloveubri wrote:
I DONT GIVE AF
@shadowofdeath wrote:
@iloveubri wrote:
@shadowofdeath wrote:
@iloveubri wrote:
THIS RAP IS STRAIGHT TRASH TBH MY DOG CAN DO BETTER
Silence.
OR WHAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I'll report you for disrespect.
IDC!!!!!!!!
I'm done fighting you about this. I'll take it to dms if I have to.

TheOgAccount:

@iloveubri wrote:
@badkarma88 wrote:
I will give it a 100/10 because I think it is really good
THIS POEM IS STRAIGHT GARBAGE
girl chill like fr

YRJ8498:

@iloveubri wrote:
@shadowofdeath wrote:
@iloveubri wrote:
I DONT GIVE AF
@shadowofdeath wrote:
@iloveubri wrote:
@shadowofdeath wrote:
@iloveubri wrote:
THIS RAP IS STRAIGHT TRASH TBH MY DOG CAN DO BETTER
Silence.
OR WHAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I'll report you for disrespect.
IDC!!!!!!!!
I'm done fighting you about this. I'll take it to dms if I have to.
if you guys dnt delete your response i will report and ask a mod to give a warning

YRJ8498:

@vocaloid @noodlesandriceyt

iloveubri:

@yrj8498 wrote:
@iloveubri wrote:
DONT MAKE ME SAY YOUR ADDRESS IN YOUR DMS
@shadowofdeath wrote:
@iloveubri wrote:
I DONT GIVE AF
@shadowofdeath wrote:
@iloveubri wrote:
@shadowofdeath wrote:
@iloveubri wrote:
THIS RAP IS STRAIGHT TRASH TBH MY DOG CAN DO BETTER
Silence.
OR WHAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I'll report you for disrespect.
IDC!!!!!!!!
I'm done fighting you about this. I'll take it to dms if I have to.
if you guys dnt delete your response i will report and ask a mod to give a warning

NoodlesAndRiceYT:

@yrj8498 wrote:
@vocaloid @noodlesandriceyt
The post isnt spam but when people reply that isnt about the post then it becomes spam because of them c:

YRJ8498:

@noodlesandriceyt wrote:
@yrj8498 wrote:
@vocaloid @noodlesandriceyt
The post isnt spam but when people reply that isnt about the post then it becomes spam because of them c:
it has turned to spam

iloveubri:

@iloveubri wrote:
@yrj8498 wrote:
@iloveubri wrote:
DONT MAKE ME SAY YOUR ADDRESS IN YOUR DMS
@shadowofdeath wrote:
@iloveubri wrote:
I DONT GIVE AF
@shadowofdeath wrote:
@iloveubri wrote:
@shadowofdeath wrote:
@iloveubri wrote:
THIS RAP IS STRAIGHT TRASH TBH MY DOG CAN DO BETTER
Silence.
OR WHAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I'll report you for disrespect.
IDC!!!!!!!!
I'm done fighting you about this. I'll take it to dms if I have to.
if you guys dnt delete your response i will report and ask a mod to give a warning
I WILL SAY YOUR ADDRESS @yrj8498

YRJ8498:

@iloveubri wrote:
@iloveubri wrote:
@yrj8498 wrote:
@iloveubri wrote:
DONT MAKE ME SAY YOUR ADDRESS IN YOUR DMS
@shadowofdeath wrote:
@iloveubri wrote:
I DONT GIVE AF
@shadowofdeath wrote:
@iloveubri wrote:
@shadowofdeath wrote:
@iloveubri wrote:
THIS RAP IS STRAIGHT TRASH TBH MY DOG CAN DO BETTER
Silence.
OR WHAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I'll report you for disrespect.
IDC!!!!!!!!
I'm done fighting you about this. I'll take it to dms if I have to.
if you guys dnt delete your response i will report and ask a mod to give a warning
I WILL SAY YOUR ADDRESS @yrj8498
say it

YRJ8498:

i'm fine

Sharkattack123:

How cuteeee

NoodlesAndRiceYT:

Please stop fighting and talking about things that isnt about the post, we are here to say how we rate the poem and/or how they can improve, not fight and be rude :D

Sharkattack123:

Noodles the policΓ­a

YRJ8498:

thats why i pinged him

NoodlesAndRiceYT:

HAHA

NoodlesAndRiceYT:

anyways its time to read the poem now c:

Sharkattack123:

I hate cops

iloveubri:

@yrj8498 wrote:
i'm fine
YEA I GOT U WHOS NEXT

NoodlesAndRiceYT:

@iloveubri wrote:
@yrj8498 wrote:
i'm fine
YEA I GOT U WHOS NEXT
Please stop, everythings calm now (:

iloveubri:

@noodlesandriceyt wrote:
@iloveubri wrote:
@yrj8498 wrote:
i'm fine
YEA I GOT U WHOS NEXT
Please stop, everythings calm now (:
I KNOW YOUR ADDRESSS

iloveubri:

YOURS TO @ilovespaghetti

iloveubri:

HAHAHHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHA

ILOVESPAGHETTI:

Good job this is really cute c: 10/10, there are some grammatical errors but overall a very well written poem!

ILOVESPAGHETTI:

@iloveubri wrote:
YOURS TO @ilovespaghetti
why'd you ping me?

Ava1:

πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

Sailor:

Nice job

cutebunny123:

@theogaccount Okay, thanks. @ava1 thanks @sailor apreppricate it. @ilovespaghetti Thank you so much @noodlesandriceyt What do you think of the poem?

Rylee88:

6.1- It doesn't rhyme at the end.

ch3wyc00ki3:

its good and can I make a song out of it

candyplays321:

so good im sending it to my gf lmao 10|10

cutebunny123:

@ch3wyc00ki3 Of course! @candyplays321 tysm I hope your gf loves it

Victorya:

you asked me to be honest...in my opinion i think its good if your trying to spread your opinion out but not good for a poem(in my opinion)

Krissy525:

10/10

cutebunny123:

@krissy525 thanks @victorya thanks for being honest and I dont know wha to label it as

Krissy525:

@cutebunny123 wrote:
@krissy525 thanks @victorya thanks for being honest and I dont know wha to label it as
np, i would love to see more of your work

ctomk3743:

That's a really good poem 7/10

cutebunny123:

@ctomk374 thx

ctomk3743:

I'm back

ctomk3743:

Once more

ctomk3743:

Help me with my poem

cutebunny123:

@ctomk3743 Text me privatly : D

ctomk3743:

Uh what is this about the date

cutebunny123:

@noodlesandriceyt what do u think of the poem

ctomk3743:

Not that bad

iloveyou69:

its so gooood

cutebunny123:

@iloveyou69 tysm

ctomk3743:

Haha

MASTERKIY:

dis is nice anddd it mkes sense :)

cutebunny123:

@masterkiy TYSm

ctomk3743:

Cool

ctomk3743:

Nice poem

cutebunny123:

@ctomk3743 ty

ctomk3743:

Remember me

ctomk3743:

Cutebunny123

cutebunny123:

Yes

maths89898:

@tetsxpreme

maths89898:

this is for you shawty

maths89898:

go get yourself a beautiful babe with this poem

Alexandralol:

@theogaccount wrote:
I like the themes present in the poem but honestly, there are too many and they kind of clash. You go from third person to first person halfway through the poem too wich gets confusing. 6/10 It's a great start keep trying! <3
Yeah I agree with you just stick to what you were talking about in the first place it kinda got of topic.

reicardo:

I love it when you call me senorita

Void13:

8/10, because as people said, it changes, I would just say stick to what u got in the first place :)

cutebunny123:

@void13 Thanks for everything you just said even though I just woke up you just made my day

Void13:

@cutebunny123 wrote:
@void13 Thanks for everything you just said even though I just woke up you just made my day
aww thx sm :)

TETSXPREME:

@maths89898

joshcool:

supra

BrokenMoon:

looks cool. nice job

cutebunny123:

@BrokenMoon :D

dANIEL06:

@iloveubri wrote:
THIS RAP IS STRAIGHT TRASH TBH MY DOG CAN DO BETTER
hatin bro dont hate

dANIEL06:

u did awsome dont let people hate

ctomk3743:

That's a nice poem

ctomk3743:

Hello cutebunny123

Ferrari:

Great job! I like it.

ctomk3743:

Me two 😎

cutebunny123:

@daniel06 Yeah, don't let people hate!

ctomk3743:

That's a leason

cutebunny123:

@ferrari Thanks bro!

ctomk3743:

Never let people think bad about your poem be proud of your self cutebunny123

ctomk3743:

Cutebunny123 talk to me private and unblock me

JJ2024:

10 i love it < 3

ctomk3743:

10000 I like it

Sharkattack123:

10/10

cutebunny123:

@sharkattack123 @jj2024 TYSM!

Sharkattack123:

keep up the good work

cutebunny123:

ctomk3743 the trobles iwll be on me so I won't

ctomk3743:

Its okay I won't tell

QueenNiyah:

THATS GOOD

QueenNiyah:

DAMG THATS GOODDD KEEP GOING U ROCKSTAR

QueenNiyah:

*DANG*

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