Question

Please rate my newest poem


Death at the rear,
not a moment without a tear
all alone without a hug
why must life be so rough
With death at the rear and a tear on my cheek
I slowly fall asleep without a peep.

Answer 1

its deep ngl

Answer 2

not finished

Answer 3

thx

Answer 4

It is rly good so far.

Answer 5

That's sound really sad

Answer 6

I wish I could help you

Answer 7

I give it a 10/10

Answer 8

very good 10/10 and I will rate the other half when it's done

Answer 9

That is so good keep it up

Answer 10

also it a 100000/10

Answer 11

Yo

Answer 12

i have alot of wistem about potery

Answer 13

hey ctomk3743

Answer 14

Hey?

Answer 15

u said yo so i said hey

Answer 16

How old are you

Answer 17

y

Answer 18

Just asking

Answer 19

13

Answer 20

Wanna meet me in zoom

Answer 21

sure

Answer 22

That whole conversation sounded weird/creepy