hey guys i wrote this song and i want feedback

yuh young tringo on the track
a cup of pringles in my bag
can we sprinkle a line on your back
yeah blow a line on that back
yeah young tringo on the track
aye aye aye
young tringo tringo

Question

hey guys i wrote this song and i want feedback

yuh young tringo on the track
a cup of pringles in my bag
can we sprinkle a line on your back
yeah blow a line on that back
yeah young tringo on the track
aye aye aye
young tringo tringo

yungtringotringo · Answer

young tringo tringo

Ferrari · Answer

it ain't bad

it ain't that bad but try writing more, 7.5/10 pretty decent

yungtringotringo · Answer

@ferrari wrote:

it ain't bad it ain't that bad but try writing more, 7.5/10 pretty decent

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Ferrari · Answer

@ferrari wrote:

it ain't bad it ain't that bad but try writing more, 7.5/10 pretty decent

decent/good

JadynB · Answer

its pretty good a little repetitive and immature, mabye if you make that the corus and make sure to when making the rest of the song that it will be able to tie back to the corus

Oreo1234 · Answer

This song is mid

Ava1 · Answer

Good job!

yungtringotringo · Answer

i’m just like rue from euphoria guys

breiadabrattzz · Answer

5/10

yungtringotringo · Answer

@breiadabrattzz wrote:

5/10

kms

breiadabrattzz · Answer

omgg i didnt sayy tht shii sb in my acc bruhhh

NoodlesAndRiceYT · Answer

I like it, i would love to see what the rest of it is when your done with it B)

BrokenMoon · Answer

what even ....