super small rap i made

My stress is boiling inside my veins
But it’s the only thing to help me explain
The pain that’s rushing through my brain
I know it’s very hard to explain
But i’m not gonna hurt you, i’m not insane

Question

super small rap i made

My stress is boiling inside my veins
But it’s the only thing to help me explain
The pain that’s rushing through my brain
I know it’s very hard to explain
But i’m not gonna hurt you, i’m not insane

Aboveusonlysky52 · Answer

i like it pretty good

NotYourGurlKayla · Answer

this is pretty unique to be honest.I really like it good job!

kaleighh533 · Answer

its very good, it rhymes, and its well thought of but you should try an add more onto it when you get a chance to make it a song but good work !!!

maths89898 · Answer

its good

maths89898 · Answer

9.3/10

MungDaal · Answer

those bars aren't elite
 please be more discreet
 but I can help you out, my features are best without a beat

jusss sayin :|

Hobo2004 · Answer

@mungdaal wrote:

those bars aren't elite please be more discreet but I can help you out, my features are best without a beat jusss sayin :|

incorrect, they are very discreet and elite, please explain your perspective

MungDaal · Answer

no, you need to be discreet because they're not elite

Hobo2004 · Answer

@mungdaal wrote:

no, you need to be discreet because they're not elite

by your standers

MungDaal · Answer

yes, my standards are sophisticated.

Hobo2004 · Answer

are you trying to rap, thats so sad
and no your standards are not sophisticated
i get you are trying to help, but downing work isnt helping,

MungDaal · Answer

um, is that supposed to rhyme, because it don't.

BTW my views are sophisticated, and i wasn't trying to rap.

Hobo2004 · Answer

@mungdaal wrote:

um, is that supposed to rhyme, because it don't. BTW my views are sophisticated, and i wasn't trying to rap.

no that wasn't suppose to rap, because I know how to rap

Hobo2004 · Answer

@aldyn

aldyn · Answer

what

aldyn · Answer

@hobo2004 wrote:

@aldyn

what

Hobo2004 · Answer

@aldyn wrote:

@hobo2004 wrote:

@aldyn

what

the rap, i made

aldyn · Answer

@hobo2004 wrote:

@aldyn wrote:

@hobo2004 wrote:

@aldyn

what

the rap, i made

it's ok

Hobo2004 · Answer

@aldyn wrote:

@hobo2004 wrote:

@aldyn wrote:

@hobo2004 wrote:

@aldyn

what

the rap, i made

it's ok

better than yours, that's for sure

aldyn · Answer

@hobo2004 wrote:

@aldyn wrote:

@hobo2004 wrote:

@aldyn wrote:

@hobo2004 wrote:

@aldyn

what

the rap, i made

it's ok

better than yours, that's for sure

lol u wish

Hobo2004 · Answer

@aldyn wrote:

@hobo2004 wrote:

@aldyn wrote:

@hobo2004 wrote:

@aldyn wrote:

@hobo2004 wrote:

@aldyn

what

the rap, i made

it's ok

better than yours, that's for sure

lol u wish

na, it's true, you know it

Hobo2004 · Answer

and i never cheated

MungDaal · Answer

both are bad

aldyn · Answer

@hobo2004 wrote:

and i never cheated

dm me

Hobo2004 · Answer

@mungdaal wrote:

both are bad

haha, says the one that cant rap at all

MungDaal · Answer

@hobo2004 wrote:

@mungdaal wrote:

both are bad

haha, says the one that cant rap at all

hahaha says the one that thinks nursery rhymes are rap HAHA and it dont even rhyme

Hobo2004 · Answer

@mungdaal wrote:

@hobo2004 wrote:

@mungdaal wrote:

both are bad

haha, says the one that cant rap at all

hahaha says the one that thinks nursery rhymes are rap HAHA and it dont even rhyme

hahah, says the one that likes dumb anime

aldyn · Answer

@mungdaal wrote:

@hobo2004 wrote:

@mungdaal wrote:

both are bad

haha, says the one that cant rap at all

hahaha says the one that thinks nursery rhymes are rap HAHA and it dont even rhyme

ok ur about to see

MungDaal · Answer

@hobo2004 wrote:

@mungdaal wrote:

@hobo2004 wrote:

@mungdaal wrote:

both are bad

haha, says the one that cant rap at all

hahaha says the one that thinks nursery rhymes are rap HAHA and it dont even rhyme

hahah, says the one that likes dumb anime

i dont watch anime, u weeb i found this on google

MungDaal · Answer

@aldyn wrote:

@mungdaal wrote:

@hobo2004 wrote:

@mungdaal wrote:

both are bad

haha, says the one that cant rap at all

hahaha says the one that thinks nursery rhymes are rap HAHA and it dont even rhyme

ok ur about to see

igh bet

Hobo2004 · Answer

@mungdaal wrote:

@aldyn wrote:

wow, you just sound like a sad imbecile

@mungdaal wrote:

@hobo2004 wrote:

@mungdaal wrote:

both are bad

haha, says the one that cant rap at all

hahaha says the one that thinks nursery rhymes are rap HAHA and it dont even rhyme

ok ur about to see

igh bet

MungDaal · Answer

there is only one way this can be settled

MungDaal · Answer

a good ol fashioned rap battle