Question

I revised my poem.


Love.
The feeling that everyone longs for.
Love.
The feeling that will shatter you,
Break you to pieces, little by little, until there is nothing left.
Love.
The feeling that will burn you to the ground, if it ever ends.
Love.
The feeling that will have you on the phone crying
To your best friend, at 3 in the morning,
because they cheated on you,
In your dream.
Love.
The feeling where you can’t focus on anything,
Because they’re always on your mind,
And refuse leave.
Love.
The feeling when it’s only one sided,
And it crushes every bone in your body,
It bits and pieces.
Because they don’t love you back.
Love.
The feeling that makes your blood boil,
When they don’t put the “I” in “I love you”
Love.


Love is horrible,
But it’s so good.
Love will be the sun that shines so bright,
After the dreary storm has ended.
Love is the feeling that feels like nothing else.
Love is the thing that keeps most of us going.
Love.

Love sucks, but its a good thing to have.
Even though there are times, that it will pull you
And your entire life beneath the Earth,
It’ll also be the thing that picks you up and puts you back together, again.
Love.

Love is the feeling that everyone dies for.
Love is the feeling that will shatter you to pieces,
Catch you on fire,
and burn you to the ground,
like you’re nothing in life.
But It’s also the feeling makes you want to dance in the rain,
Love is the feeling that helps you sleep at night,
Love is The feeling that makes you get butterflies in your
Stomach when all you did was think about them.
Love is The feeling that makes you blush any time someone
Mentions their name.
Love.
Love is a beautiful thing.
Not all love is good though,
But it’s a great thing to have.
Love.
The feeling that will crush you and pull you down to the bottom of the Earth,
Then be the thing that pulls ou out of your storm and puts you back together.
Love is crazy, don’t you think?
Love.


Lmk if you like it and I need help picking a name for it<3

Answer 1

Quick comment, I think there's a slight typo where you wrong "and refuse leave" maybe "refuse to leave" instead? Overall it looks fantastic though! Really encapsulates a feeling I know well. The only title I can possibly think of is "love" haha

Answer 2

@kpalm Thank you soon much!! I went and fixed the typo, thank you for letting me know about it<3

Answer 3

@riah1 of course, anytime :)

Answer 4

how deep nice

Answer 5

@sharkattack123 Thank you soon much!!<33

Answer 6

I loved this!

Answer 7

@noexp Thank you soon much!!<333

Answer 8

i love this sm, is rlly good

Answer 9

@masterkiy Thank you so much<33

Answer 10

better than mines

Answer 11

@landongoma Your's was really good!!<3 Thank you so much tho!!<333

Answer 12

OMG its really guuuud, I love it!!😁😁😊😊

Answer 13

Nice

Answer 14

maybe the title could be "The feelings of love" Because you have expressed how love feels like and how it feels to be loved

Answer 15

Soooo gooodd and very relatable lol😅

Answer 16

@xxmimixx Thank you so much!! I love your PFP<3

Answer 17

this is great it is really relatable because we have all live it and you are just speacking the truth great job!!!

Answer 18

true thoo

Answer 19

Lmao

Answer 20

@hunter3506 Thank you soon much!!!! <3333

Answer 21

This is damn nice good job

Answer 22

that is even better

Answer 23

mine lol

Answer 24

It's really good!!

Answer 25

this

Answer 26

is really good keep up the work

Answer 27

This is beautiful <3 good job love!

Answer 28

omg this is sooo good i love it

Answer 29

i love it

Answer 30

WOW, I can't believe me reading this of a nice poem. I love how you revised your poem because other people don't.

Answer 31

this is so cool i love it!!

Answer 32

Wow, I'm really impressed. It's like you took what I was feeling and put it in a poem. good job! <3

Answer 33

Thats amazing boo! Keep it up! You did amazing. And it looks and sounds absolutely wonderful! Keep up the good work.

Answer 34

THAT GOODD

Answer 35

Great job. I'd call this "The Feeling of Love". Keep it up!

Answer 36

:)