I just made a poem and rate it 1/10 honestly please
To explore and discover
To fall back but recover
The will to succeed
I want to proceed

To climb and conquer
To satisfy my Hunger
To travel not to arrive
To feel not to derive

Play Smile to the unknown
To sing to the farlarn
To dream recklessly
To love breathlessly
To live all I can
For short is a lifespan

Question

I just made a poem and rate it 1/10 honestly please
To explore and discover
To fall back but recover
The will to succeed
I want to proceed

To climb and conquer
To satisfy my Hunger
To travel not to arrive
To feel not to derive

Play Smile to the unknown
To sing to the farlarn
To dream recklessly
To love breathlessly
To live all I can
For short is a lifespan

aldyn · Answer

5/10 could be better

Riah1 · Answer

it's good, I'd say a 6.5/10

aldyn · Answer

lol

hunter3506 · Answer

@aldyn wrote:

5/10 could be better

thx for being honest

aldyn · Answer

@hunter3506 wrote:

@aldyn wrote:

5/10 could be better

thx for being honest

np

hunter3506 · Answer

lol

hunter3506 · Answer

sorry I'm not very good at this stuff

Riah1 · Answer

@hunter3506 wrote:

sorry I'm not very good at this stuff

you'll get better!! Keep up the good work!!<3

hunter3506 · Answer

ill try

hunter3506 · Answer

this is actually my first time ever writing a poem actually so

Riah1 · Answer

@hunter3506 wrote:

this is actually my first time ever writing a poem actually so

for your first time, it's great

hunter3506 · Answer

well at least I tried lol and thx

afflatedAnimism · Answer

8/10 very good but a little too short to interest me. But that's just my taste, I think your poetry is wonderful!

hunter3506 · Answer

@afflatedanimism wrote:

8/10 very good but a little too short to interest me. But that's just my taste, I think your poetry is wonderful!

thx ill try to make a longer one

afflatedAnimism · Answer

@hunter3506 wrote:

@afflatedanimism wrote:

8/10 very good but a little too short to interest me. But that's just my taste, I think your poetry is wonderful!

thx ill try to make a longer one

Alr!! Good poem by the way, I hope you didn't think I hated it it was very good

hunter3506 · Answer

all good