Question

Sorry for inactivity if anyone remembers me but here's some lyrics I wrote with a friend. It's different from the normal stuff we write, stuff like trauma or whatever. This song is about falling in love (CRINGE/j) please rate and sorry if it's bad

It's only 2,
And it's dark out
Blinded by moon.
Can't you meet my gaze?
And fall deeper again.
Don't come back
I'll only long longer…

Is this really my heart?
Or is it all just my gut?
Am I wanting my fill?
Or am I begging too much?
And if it's my head,
I'll need to come back.

So we'll meet up
At the shop I could never
Afford but I'd keep it to myself.
I'll never stop,
This longingful contact.
Two shots and cream please.
Isn't that what you order often?
Don't respond. After all, it's way too quiet.
Is this really my heart?
Or is this my gut?
Am I wanting my fill?
Or am I begging too much?
And if it's my head,
I'll need to come back.

This is not what I remember.
I can't unsee this
I've seen the infatuation
And the only love I've known.
Don't respond. After all, it's way too quiet.
The stars beat in. And I'm staying down.
Keep this [redacted] in line.
I'm such a mess.
But isn't that what you've known?
Is this really my heart?
Or is this my gut?
Am I wanting my fill?
Or am I begging too much?
And if it's in my head,
I'll need to come back.

Answer 1

Sorry it's super long also

Answer 2

Lol it’s good

Answer 3

Keep up the great work

Answer 4

I have made song to back then but I never showed no one and now there lost

Answer 5

thats really good

Answer 6

np

Answer 7

This is good

Answer 8

Yo this is great

Answer 9

cute its hot

Answer 10

very cRiNgE but i likey <3