thoughts on this-

Madly obsessed wit
a man i cant have
My life is a mess
not knowing my dad
Controlled like a puppet
Pulled with 4 strings
I feel so hidden
i wanna be seen

I dont like my body
Its filled full of hate
I choose not to smile
I walk by my fate
My heart feels so hurt
I want it to stop
Was down at the bottom
Ion think ill make it to the top

No one will know
the things that i think
The thoughts in my head
The thoughts in my brain
My body feels weak
Like its on drugs
I dont think its that
I just need a hug

Say im ok
But im really broken
The words in my mouth
Most left unspoken
My friends feel so distant
Im feeling lonely
I love both my parents but
they just disowned me

The weight on my shoulders
Its getting heavy
Like its gunna fall
But whos gunna blame me
My worlds slowly falling
An im feeling insane
I just wanna be loved
man frick all this pain

Question

thoughts on this-

Madly obsessed wit 
a man i cant have
My life is a mess
not knowing my dad
Controlled like a puppet 
Pulled with 4 strings 
I feel so hidden
i wanna be seen

I dont like my body 
Its filled full of hate
I choose not to smile
I walk by my fate 
My heart feels so hurt
I want it to stop
Was down at the bottom 
Ion think ill make it to the top
 
No one will know 
the things that i think
The thoughts in my head
The thoughts in my brain
My body feels weak
Like its on drugs
I dont think its that
I just need a hug

Say im ok
But im really broken
The words in my mouth
Most left unspoken
My friends feel so distant 
Im feeling lonely 
I love both my parents but
they just disowned me

The weight on my shoulders
Its getting heavy
Like its gunna fall
But whos gunna blame me
My worlds slowly falling 
An im feeling insane
I just wanna be loved 
man frick all this pain

Joe348 · Answer

really one word for this: felt also hebd<33

Joe348 · Answer

that very 2 lines though ;-;

Sharkattack123 · Answer

how lovely and deep

davidelgado · Answer

what kind of melody

UGKRza · Answer

I'm used to makin' every word connect with syllable Rhymes but it's pretty good. 8/10

RodWav3 · Answer

good job

RodWav3 · Answer

but u need me on that ft

milli · Answer

wow

milli · Answer

this is really good

cbfitz46578 · Answer

@kaleighh533 wrote:

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This is really good, you should put some music to this if you haven't already. Also, I was wondering if you could comment, because I want to give you a medal, for 'best response'.

cbfitz46578 · Answer

I love all of the passion and expression that you put into this. I could truly see the feeling. It's like your life is a show, and I am able to watch it from afar, but so vaguely. Most of what you are experiencing, when writing this, I can relate to. This poem, song, or whatever this beautiful sculpture of artwork it is, truly has touched my heart. These words that have been left unspoken really helped sort out all the trauma that has been left. From a hole in my chest. I know, that life can be a lot, at times. Like you, and many others, I have experienced some things, that I really wished not to go through or be a part of. That pain, sadness, heartbreak, loneliness, really affects one's life. It really impacts your surrounding. Most of the time, it's just hard to breathe. It's like every breath is a waste. Because why should one breathe, if it only leads to an unbearable vacancy of faded dreams. I wish every day, that I could change my life. My body, self-esteem, or my social environments. But then, I think, if I were to do that, then I wouldn't be the person which I am today. I understand that what you had gone through, is horrible, unspeakable, and depressing., but think about it this way. If you hadn't gone through those things, then you most likely wouldn't have written this amazing artwork. If you hadn't stood at the ends of the earth, breathing in the cold, shallow air, you probably wouldn't be who you are. Those things, that have hurt us, are the very things that have shaped us, into the people that we are today. I don't even have to know you personally, just by reading this (your soul) I can tell, that you are 110% perfect. No matter what anyone may say about you. No matter what you may say or think about yourself. Please don't forget that you are perfect. That you are beautiful. That you are you.

ILOVESPAGHETTI · Answer

good job :) I definitely agree with what @cbfitz46578 said. I think you did a nice job!

kaleighh533 · Answer

@rodwav3 wrote:

but u need me on that ft

bet

kaleighh533 · Answer

@cbfitz46578 wrote:

I love all of the passion and expression that you put into this. I could truly see the feeling. It's like your life is a show, and I am able to watch it from afar, but so vaguely. Most of what you are experiencing, when writing this, I can relate to. This poem, song, or whatever this beautiful sculpture of artwork it is, truly has touched my heart. These words that have been left unspoken really helped sort out all the trauma that has been left. From a hole in my chest. I know, that life can be a lot, at times. Like you, and many others, I have experienced some things, that I really wished not to go through or be a part of. That pain, sadness, heartbreak, loneliness, really affects one's life. It really impacts your surrounding. Most of the time, it's just hard to breathe. It's like every breath is a waste. Because why should one breathe, if it only leads to an unbearable vacancy of faded dreams. I wish every day, that I could change my life. My body, self-esteem, or my social environments. But then, I think, if I were to do that, then I wouldn't be the person which I am today. I understand that what you had gone through, is horrible, unspeakable, and depressing., but think about it this way. If you hadn't gone through those things, then you most likely wouldn't have written this amazing artwork. If you hadn't stood at the ends of the earth, breathing in the cold, shallow air, you probably wouldn't be who you are. Those things, that have hurt us, are the very things that have shaped us, into the people that we are today. I don't even have to know you personally, just by reading this (your soul) I can tell, that you are 110% perfect. No matter what anyone may say about you. No matter what you may say or think about yourself. Please don't forget that you are perfect. That you are beautiful. That you are you.

thank you so much that means "alottt" <3333

kaleighh533 · Answer

@ilovespaghetti wrote:

good job :) I definitely agree with what @cbfitz46578 said. I think you did a nice job!

thank youuuuu <3

kaleighh533 · Answer

@sharkattack123 wrote:

how lovely and deep

thank you <33

kaleighh533 · Answer

@milli wrote:

this is really good

thank u so much (:

kaleighh533 · Answer

@joe348 wrote:

really one word for this: felt also hebd<33

thank youuu <333 but its tomorrow (:

Joe348 · Answer

@kaleighh533 wrote:

@joe348 wrote:

really one word for this: felt also hebd<33

thank youuu <333 but its tomorrow (:

ik that... mine is 2 thats why i said early lmaoo bruh we fr twins

kaleighh533 · Answer

@joe348 wrote:

@kaleighh533 wrote:

@joe348 wrote:

really one word for this: felt also hebd<33

thank youuu <333 but its tomorrow (:

ik that... mine is 2 thats why i said early lmaoo bruh we fr twins

ong we are how did we get seperated D':

Ava1 · Answer

good job

Krissy525 · Answer

Man, I felt this. You did great. If you ever need a shoulder to cry on, hit me up. I give this a 10000000/10

QueenNiyah · Answer

THAT GOODDDDD

selenass · Answer

my life lol

selenass · Answer

copy n pasted 🔫

CSimpola · Answer

Love it so deep and lovely kaleighh keep going for it make more and stuff dont every give up stay strong its really really goooooooood!