Question

Wrote a poem. (I don't share my name online, all aspects of my identity is hidden including my face, so I'm using a pen name.)

"Broken heart" by JJ

You know what's weird?
How someone can enter your life and suddenly just leave.
Kinda crazy, considering how many hearts get broken when their first ever love just walks out.
Leaves.
It is gone.
And no matter what you do you can't get them stuck out of your head.
Like a song that's on repeat.
It doesn't leave your head but yet is always there to stay.
Funny, right?
It's not funny. It's downright cruel
The way you hurt her,
It wasn't right.
I promise, I won't be like him.
He hurt you, and you're a queen.
You deserve better than that.
I promise you will find better.
Broken hearts like yours deserve to be picked up and put together again and never broken again.
Hang in there.

(This is my first time writing a poem, I like writing songs better, sorry if it's bad.)

Answer 1

i like it :O

Answer 2

Thank you :)

Answer 3

Why does the girl have to be heartbroken? that can happen to guys

Answer 4

Plus everyone already saw ur face after you failed to cetfish people, just putting that out there

Answer 5

that's so goooood :)

Answer 6

ur literally named hobo

Answer 7

I really like it. keep it up<33

Answer 8

I love it

Answer 9

its good keep up up the good work you could rlly make it as a poet

Answer 10

you have the wrong queens clout yrj. her account got hacked recently

Answer 11

No, when u search up users, there is only one queens clout and that is you

Answer 12

im the hacker dumb***

Answer 13

now stop talking about my girl like that please and thank you

Answer 14

good riddance

Answer 15

No cussing.

Answer 16

im confused

Answer 17

she let me take over after she told me that she was being harrassed

Answer 18

@thisgirlpretty I am pretty sure this post has become spam

Answer 19

its become nothing yrj.

Answer 20

Let's keep this post on topic @queensclout12

Answer 21

Thank you Ma'am

Answer 22

i closed it happy now