Question

This is a poem I made, lmk what you think.

Title: Caged

I want to fly
And never come back
Let’s say goodbye
I don’t want to be tracked

I had a dream
That I flew
I realized it wasn’t what it seemed
That’s when I knew I was screwed

When you opened my cage
I was full of joy, yet full of rage
Since the day I’ve been kidnapped
I went half out the window before I saw that I was strapped

I didn’t think I was really trapped
There’s still no way I can cope
Crap now I really have to adapt
Could you at least loosen the rope?

My chirp is the only way I could call
See the world through the hole in the wall
Now I can only gaze upon the sky
Dream I was up there, but could only cry

Answer 1

good job

Answer 2

i like it

Answer 3

truth I like great job 10/10

Answer 4

Aw, I like that part "ion wanna be tracked"

Answer 5

I like, good job

Answer 6

Ik but it's still good

Answer 7

Thank you :)

Answer 8

amazing job 100% loved it