Question

I have a new song but I just like scurried and wrote this after having a conversation with someone... That's not cool
Hey there?
I know you notice me
Please stop ignoring
We know that we have a little something going on
That's right
I’m sitting here like a fool
Watching you do this to you
Hey there?
I’m not fine
Maybe I’ll be okay later but this isn’t getting better
Yell and yell as I tell
You to stop come on please stop it

I can’t explain the feeling I get about that
Knowing it isn’t pretty
It concerns me and it keeps me wondering
Selfish is word number one
Word two how can I keep going at this
Break this in half
NO
Telling you now it makes me uneasy
This isn’t a breeze cause I know
That’s not cool

I’ve been through this
It’s not fun
Being reminded of a part of you that was selfish
Don’t forget that's a scar so that's for life.
Imagine all of that just piled up to forever hurt you
This is more than physical
It’s also more mental
We have problems that we get to choose
Why not make this easy
Don’t take the wrong turn
I told you please don’t do this
It’s only one life that is needed to be saved
Please this is all I am asking please just let it go

I can’t explain the feeling I get about that
Knowing it isn’t pretty
It concerns me and keeps me wondering
Selfish Word number one
Word two how can I keep going at this
Break this in half
NO
Telling you now it makes me uneasy
This isn’t a breeze cause I know
That’s not cool

Please let me make this clearer
Don’t cut
You are beautiful as yourself
It brings me down in the dumps
To see anyone who brings this to themselves
I know it’s selfish but don’t forget
That’s not cool…

Answer 1

Great job this is amazing! Keep up the great work!
Hey when might you come out with another one?
How long did this take you to do?
might you be able to add a beat to it?

Answer 2

ok nice

Answer 3

but like... it is that cool...