Does this chapter get you nervous of when he almost gets caught? I want to know how this makes the reader feel, thanks! (also ignore any spelling errors i literally just typed it up)

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1dDnGxpqi43k2ALrMzIwyKtTEVBOij-amqAjzCU0GoW8/edit?usp=sharing

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Does this chapter get you nervous of when he almost gets caught? I want to know how this makes the reader feel, thanks! (also ignore any spelling errors i literally just typed it up)

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1dDnGxpqi43k2ALrMzIwyKtTEVBOij-amqAjzCU0GoW8/edit?usp=sharing

Timmyspu · Answer

This is pretty good. I would check through it and fix your spelling errors. This is well written tho. Well Done!

cutebunny123 · Answer

Yes, it does make me nervous because I know he doesn't want to get caught and if he gets caught he's in huge trouble and I'm feeling anxious when I read that.