I hope you guys like it. I made it for a certain person and she saw it. But I was wondering what other people had to say about it.
"Angels"
She was an Angel
She used to fly like a dove
She used to hold me
And keep my head up above.
She is an Angel,
there are many more
She was sent down from
above to show me how to love.
I didnt realize it until it was too late.
I found out that
I saved an Angel
Her wings were clipped and
she fell from the sky.
I took her in cared for her.
And then I broke her hurt her
showed her that
this world isn't for everyone.
Showed her what hurt was.
Now I'm wishing that
I still had this Angel from above.
There are Angels among us
They show us what we should be.
They help us see that this world could be full of love.
We don't realize that they are here until it is too late.
Then you see that you hurt the
Angel from above.

Question

I hope you guys like it. I made it for a certain person and she saw it. But I was wondering what other people had to say about it.
"Angels" 
She was an Angel
 She used to fly like a dove 
She used to hold me 
And keep my head up above. 
She is an Angel, 
there are many more 
She was sent down from 
above to show me how to love. 
I didnt realize it until it was too late. 
I found out that 
I saved an Angel 
Her wings were clipped and 
she fell from the sky. 
I took her in cared for her. 
And then I broke her hurt her 
showed her that 
this world isn't for everyone. 
Showed her what hurt was. 
Now I'm wishing that 
I still had this Angel from above. 
There are Angels among us 
They show us what we should be.
 They help us see that this world could be full of love.
 We don't realize that they are here until it is too late. 
Then you see that you hurt the 
Angel from above.

Axelotle · Answer

i love that, its so deep, i actually felt that, you should do more, i give this a 1,000,000/10, and i mean everything i say!

Danyourman1 · Answer

@axelotle wrote:

i love that, its so deep, i actually felt that, you should do more, i give this a 1,000,000/10, and i mean everything i say!

Thank you! To be honest, this is the first actual song I have put together, the other ones were just bits and pieces. But this one is full.

Ferrari · Answer

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Ferrari · Answer

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Danyourman1 · Answer

@ferrari wrote:

ฏ๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎/10 great job

It didnt show up

Ferrari · Answer

what

i meant 10/ฏ๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎ great job

Danyourman1 · Answer

@ferrari wrote:

what i meant 10/ฏ๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎๎ great job

thnx

Ferrari · Answer

yw

ShoaibChaudhry · Answer

100/10 Nice job broo

Danyourman1 · Answer

@shoaibchaudhry wrote:

100/10 Nice job broo

thank's

dgreer4 · Answer

@dgreer4 wrote:

Hmm maybe you should dedicate this poem to someone else xD but yeah it’s good lol

Maybe you should dedicate this song to @parisj06 since you always find a reason to run back to her… I mean if it’s meant to be it’s meant to be and now I know that was never us! @danyourman1

ParisJ06 · Answer

@dgreer4 wrote:

Hmm maybe you should dedicate this poem to someone else xD but yeah it’s good lol

Maybe you should dedicate this song to @parisj06 since you always find a reason to run back to her… I mean if it’s meant to be it’s meant to be and now I know that was never us! @danyourman1

aw did u get your wittle feeelings hurt bc im better..must suck

dgreer4 · Answer

Hmm you wish nah girl I was just letting you know what @ssholes you both are. I hated falling for your b.s. hope your life is bliss bcs I can say my life would’ve been better if I never met you both loo

ParisJ06 · Answer

hhow are we @ssholes lmao why bc he wanted me not u. suck it up

dgreer4 · Answer

@parisj06 wrote:

hhow are we @ssholes lmao why bc he wanted me not u. suck it up

Hmmm. Let’s see we’ll he forgot to mention that he was dating u AGAIN so I had to hear it from you 🙄

ParisJ06 · Answer

ok? he just didnt tell u aint a big deal