Question

So alot of you liked my poem called "Love" So i decided to write another one,Tell me how yall like it.

Depression

As a tear rolled down their face,
Their heart began to race.
They would never go to sleep,
And their thoughts was really deep.

As they sat there all alone,
They started to feel as they were unknown .
Thinking of the past,
That they wished would of last.

So they took a gun to their head,
Thinking of all the times they wish they was dead.
And fell to the ground,
As their body was never found.

Answer 1

Nice job :)
Its really deep

Answer 2

I like it so far keep doing this : )

Answer 3

also mid

Answer 4

we dont care

Answer 5

Lol thx

Answer 6

Wonderful job! I love this so much. This made my day by reading it!

Answer 7

great job it really tell you the truth keep it up

Answer 8

i love it bestie <3

Answer 9

Tyyy bestieee <33

Answer 10

hehehe <33

Answer 11

lol

Answer 12

Thank you for the medal hunter <33

Answer 13

any day thx to you too

Answer 14

anytime ^^ <3

Answer 15

lol XD

Answer 16

:D

Answer 17

(:

Answer 18

:'>

Answer 19

l 0 l

Answer 20

UoU

Answer 21

huhu

Answer 22

0-0

Answer 23

hoho

Answer 24

lmao

Answer 25

UwU

Answer 26

this is fire my ears are bleeding

Answer 27

uh?

Answer 28

It's really good but, I found some errors while reading it, lol.

Answer 29

Oh errors like what?

Answer 30

"And their thoughts was really deep." and
"Thinking of all the times they wish they was dead."
You should probably use were for both of those sentences instead of "was."

Answer 31

oh that makes more since