Question

The Language Arts Experiment

For an assignment, I wrote a poem...
I usually write rap music, but I decided to write this for a change.

I wanted to make a poem
Sit down, and write it
I may not be the best
But at least I try, I try it.
The first line is always like the last.
Just like when you write a poem fast.
You get first in place.
You have to try your best.
Find your words.
It is almost like
Picking out a favorite shirt.
Because you know you like to wear it.
Some people like my songs and poems
They want to hear it
But if you really care about the world
And world peace
More than a simple poem
You have to share it
You must go tell others
Go!
Go tell others about the fact that...
This world still rotates slow.
It won't change for a long time.
So take a breath, and try.
Try your best to do what you want
You must try to try.
Live your life
Always make sure not to lie
And live to strive
Every day of that life
Because then
You might cause a change
Be the best?
No.
You can be better than the past you, though.
Keep your emotions low.
Do the best you can do.
You can cause a change in the world!
It's true!
I am looking at you.

Answer 1

good job

Answer 2

Thanks.

Answer 3

This is great, especially for someone's first poem. Keep it up!

Answer 4

I can tell this is a limerick poem, I like those. This is really great, I will never stop trying to achieve my goals.

Answer 5

Thats good