Question

I have to write a poem for writing about why having money and being rich isn't always a good thing. it's a "i am" poem. let me know what u think:
I am the richest person u will ever meet
I wonder if I will ever feel complete
I hear them muttering about me wherever I go
I see the real the beginning to show
I want to feel like and actual person
I am the richest person ever, yet I'll forever hide behind a curtain

I pretend like I'm normal, one of them
I feel like an old building, I am condemned
I touch my money, filling with disgust
I worry that there is no one I can ever trust
I cry, a tear spills out of my eye
I am rich, the hell that follows, I can't deny

I understand that you all want my money
I say "no" and you say "ha. funny"
I dream that people won't use me
I try, but I know I'll never be free
I hope to someday be like you
I am rich, but I wish for a better life, something new

Answer 1

Amazing