I wrote a poem called 1st things 1st,Tell me how y'all like it!!

1st things is what she said,
1 Million thoughts running thru her head.
Thinking of all the times she felt dead,
And it always put her in a dread.

1st things 1st is what he said,
Trying his best to be happy instead.
Laying on the floor crying,
Whenever he said he would rather be dying.

1st thing 1st is what the world thought,
And a lot of people always fought.
So many deaths all around,
Wishing for another round.

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I wrote a poem called 1st things 1st,Tell me how y'all like it!!

1st things is what she said,
1 Million thoughts running thru her head.
Thinking of all the times she felt dead,
And it always put her in a dread.

1st things 1st is what he said,
Trying his best to be happy instead.
Laying on the floor crying,
Whenever he said he would rather be dying.

1st thing 1st is what the world thought,
And a lot of people always fought.
So many deaths all around,
Wishing for another round.

NotYourGurlKayla · Answer

i meant 1st things 1st in the beginning of the poem

NotYourGurlKayla · Answer

@riah1 i noticed how you written a bunch of stuff so i kind of wanted your opinion on how my poem was to lol

NotYourGurlKayla · Answer

Also for those of you who are wondering what i meant for the last sentence in my poem, "Wishing for another round" I meant that they wished they had another chance into living because i had said before "so many deaths all around"

Sailor · Answer

nice job o>o

NotYourGurlKayla · Answer

Thxx!!

Sailor · Answer

@notyourgurlkayla wrote:

Thxx!!

No problem. :)

suger · Answer

good job

Riah1 · Answer

@notyourgurlkayla wrote:

@riah1 i noticed how you written a bunch of stuff so i kind of wanted your opinion on how my poem was to lol

This is really good, all of the poems I have written were for an assignment and we had to tell the story behind our poem, so I had to make it means something, I am so happy that you wanted my opinion tho. I love this. Keep up the amazing work!! much love!!<33

NotYourGurlKayla · Answer

@riah1 wrote:

@notyourgurlkayla wrote:

@riah1 i noticed how you written a bunch of stuff so i kind of wanted your opinion on how my poem was to lol

This is really good, all of the poems I have written were for an assignment and we had to tell the story behind our poem, so I had to make it means something, I am so happy that you wanted my opinion tho. I love this. Keep up the amazing work!! much love!!<33

aww tysm :)

Riah1 · Answer

@notyourgurlkayla wrote:

@riah1 wrote:

@notyourgurlkayla wrote:

@riah1 i noticed how you written a bunch of stuff so i kind of wanted your opinion on how my poem was to lol

This is really good, all of the poems I have written were for an assignment and we had to tell the story behind our poem, so I had to make it means something, I am so happy that you wanted my opinion tho. I love this. Keep up the amazing work!! much love!!<33

aww tysm :)

anytime luv<3