Question

i wrote a poem myself about someone going through a breakup. what do yall think
New Lovers

By: Christopher Way

You comfort me in every way
and me not knowing what to say
My feelings of love are wanted
but i guess you never understated

I see you in the halls
And high fives are called
They are then received
And we achieve

You dress nice
I dream of you at night
Only one word can describe
Because you are beautiful thats why

What i'm trying to say
Is just give me a chance okay
This is a new day
I want to say

You look beautiful today
And so many other things can be said in one day
But do they say
That they love you the same?

Answer 1

Damn this is deep bro. I can understand this. Hope you feel better.

Answer 2

This is amazing

Answer 3

I love this! Way to go, I'm waiting to read more of your stuff.

Answer 4

Dang I understand what you're going through. Either you'll get past her or you get back together with her. No matter what you'll be happy again. Promise

Answer 5

amazing poem <3