Question

“Hurt”



My best friend,

My trust,

Was all broken,

Walked you dog,

Let you have my trust,

It was all a lie,

It's so much pain,

I tried to be your friend,

It was so much pain,

You should've known the pain in eyes,

Told you to stop,

You keep going,

You kept telling me to not saying a word,

You were wrong to say I love you,

Wrong to do this to me,

How did you want me to love you,

When I couldn’t love myself,

I'm a shrinking ship that’s burning,

Your nothing that should've saved me,

I had to much love to give,

You still hurt me after everything,

What if I told you im sorry,

Would you have stopped,

Would you have given up,

Or would I still be hurt?

Answer 1

@velmalovesshaggy145

Answer 2

this is sad to be honest this is really true and just tells us how sad the world really is thank you i think it is good

Answer 3

Yes?

Answer 4

What is it?

Answer 5

Im not talking to you

Answer 6

ohh ok

Answer 7

Oh my god

Answer 8

This is perfect! @landongoma

Answer 9

what are you talking ab?

Answer 10

oh ok cool

Answer 11

You misspelled a couple words

Answer 12

This is great Lana. Keep going, you're an amazing writer!

Answer 13

thank you

Answer 14

good job

Answer 15

that good

Answer 16

thank you

Answer 17

ywyw

Answer 18

Very good

Answer 19

thank yoou

Answer 20

@landongoma I love this, you did an amazing job in it. I can't wait to read more from you!

Answer 21

thank you

Answer 22

@landongoma Of course!

Answer 23

hi

Answer 24

@landongoma

Answer 25

nothin just saying hey

Answer 26

I gave my literacy agent your poem

Answer 27

She said you have real potential

Answer 28

So i guess we just wait

Answer 29

no problem

Answer 30

Maybe you could help me with some dialogue for my climax of the comic book im making

Answer 31

I would love to help you

Answer 32

Thanks i appreciate it

Answer 33

Your welcome

Answer 34

How old are you? She has an age limit for publishing(Dm)

Answer 35

Woah, This is good Lana.

Answer 36

thank you

Answer 37

Great poem

Answer 38

This was amazing....great work😊

Answer 39

this is amazing!!!!

Answer 40

This is great

Answer 41

Other people write poems than her

Answer 42

dang

Answer 43

It's guuuud I LOVE it keep up the guuud work😁😁😁

Answer 44

That was amazing!

Answer 45

it is great

Answer 46

how many poems have you made?