Inspired By @sailor aka Douma

What Comes Next

After Trauma What Comes

After Ticking What Comes

After I Tolerate What Comes

After The Turmoil What Comes

After Torment What Comes

After Team What Comes

After Tonight What Comes

Question

Inspired By @sailor aka Douma

What Comes Next

After Trauma What Comes

After Ticking What Comes

After I Tolerate What Comes

After The Turmoil What Comes

After Torment What Comes

After Team What Comes

After Tonight What Comes

LandonGoma · Answer

maybe switch it up some. Other than than good job

Sollums · Answer

@landongoma wrote:

maybe switch it up some. Other than than good job

Thanks For The Tip

LandonGoma · Answer

@sollums wrote:

@landongoma wrote:

maybe switch it up some. Other than than good job

Thanks For The Tip

your welcome

Sailor · Answer

Nice job .3.
other than switching up some of the stuff it looks great .-.

Sollums · Answer

@sailor wrote:

Nice job .3. other than switching up some of the stuff it looks great .-.

<3

Aurxlina · Answer

wow i like it

kaleighh533 · Answer

Like the others said maybe switch it up a bit, maybe add a few more lines in-between the current ones you have, while also trying to make them all rhyme if thats what your going for other than that i think it looks great keep up the good work (;

noobpro78 · Answer

raelly good