Hey Guys...I got helped writing a song (@Alexandralol) I was seeing how it is and if you can rate it or add new lyrics or a verse i would appreciate it💜 Have a wonderful day or night😊

You've been my best friend for a year. And it feels like I've been stuck here. But if it's with you ill be fine. Cause you'll be my best friend till I die. Besties is not just something you say. But it's more than a hey. love how we both love to sing. We like twinises And when I'm here saying these things. You make me feel like I'm free. You've been here for me. So I can say I'm happy. When you call me pretty. it's a different type of feeling. I love how we agree on the same things. And how we are so goofy. hopefully, you'll be here with me. I can't believe I get to call you my bestiee.

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Hey Guys...I got helped writing a song (@Alexandralol) I was seeing how it is and if you can rate it or add new lyrics or a verse i would appreciate it💜 Have a wonderful day or night😊

You've been my best friend for a year. And it feels like I've been stuck here. But if it's with you ill be fine. Cause you'll be my best friend till I die. Besties is not just something you say. But it's more than a hey. love how we both love to sing. We like twinises And when I'm here saying these things. You make me feel like I'm free. You've been here for me. So I can say I'm happy. When you call me pretty. it's a different type of feeling. I love how we agree on the same things. And how we are so goofy. hopefully, you'll be here with me. I can't believe I get to call you my bestiee.

velmalovesshaggy145 · Answer

Your my best friend
I wonder what to say in every text
that i send
cuz i never want this feeling to end
Will this last forever
We need to take a chance
Its now or never
When we fight we say whatever 
But no matter what our friendship 
cant be sever(d)
We survived because we believed
When the fights we had were over,I was relieved
I hope this last eternally
So I can spend eternity 
With my bestieee

velmalovesshaggy145 · Answer

You need to find a bpm for it to sound good

velmalovesshaggy145 · Answer

the last five lines can be your second chorus

XxMimiXx · Answer

@velmalovesshaggy145 wrote:

Your my best friend I wonder what to say in every text that i send cuz i never want this feeling to end Will this last forever We need to take a chance Its now or never When we fight we say whatever But no matter what our friendship cant be sever(d) We survived because we believed When the fights we had were over,I was relieved I hope this last eternally So I can spend eternity With my bestieee

This is actually really good lmaooo yea i'm planning on doing that my uncle does music so he's gonna help me thank youuuu sooo muchhhhh💜🦋

tiffbb101 · Answer

omgggg thats so cuteeeee tbh i dont think need to make changes its perfect the way it is

XxMimiXx · Answer

@tiffbb101 wrote:

omgggg thats so cuteeeee tbh i dont think need to make changes its perfect the way it is

awee thank you so much

tiffbb101 · Answer

ywwwww anytimeee

velmalovesshaggy145 · Answer

well im the one who wrote it

velmalovesshaggy145 · Answer

dang no credit

babygirlXOXO · Answer

Nice song sis 😁😁

velmalovesshaggy145 · Answer

@babygirlxoxo wrote:

Nice song sis 😁😁

guy

babygirlXOXO · Answer

@velmalovesshaggy145 wrote:

@babygirlxoxo wrote:

Nice song sis 😁😁

guy

what??

velmalovesshaggy145 · Answer

@babygirlxoxo wrote:

@velmalovesshaggy145 wrote:

@babygirlxoxo wrote:

Nice song sis 😁😁

guy

what??

guys with a question mark is what i meant

XxMimiXx · Answer

oooo sorrryyy I GIVE CREDIT TO @velmalovesshaggy145

XxMimiXx · Answer

@babygirlxoxo wrote:

Nice song sis 😁😁

THANKS BREE

babygirlXOXO · Answer

@xxmimixx wrote:

@babygirlxoxo wrote:

Nice song sis 😁😁

THANKS BREE

welcome you big alien head

babygirlXOXO · Answer

@babygirlxoxo wrote:

@xxmimixx wrote:

@babygirlxoxo wrote:

Nice song sis 😁😁

THANKS BREE

welcome you big alien head

LMAO😂😂😂

XxMimiXx · Answer

@babygirlxoxo wrote:

@xxmimixx wrote:

@babygirlxoxo wrote:

Nice song sis 😁😁

THANKS BREE

welcome you big alien head

LMAO😂😂😂

😁 that's meeee

oopdontknowher · Answer

i love this! it is really good way better than i could do thats for sure :)

XxMimiXx · Answer

@oopdontknowher wrote:

i love this! it is really good way better than i could do thats for sure :)

lmao thank you @alexandralol & @velmalovesshaggy145 helped me with this but i appreciate it💜

XxMimiXx · Answer

@oopdontknowher wrote:

i love this! it is really good way better than i could do thats for sure :)

i'm suree u are better than me tho lmao

oopdontknowher · Answer

well @velmalovesshaggy145 and @alexandralol good job guys! love the group effort

XxMimiXx · Answer

and if ayone can give him or her a medal i would appreciate it :)

velmalovesshaggy145 · Answer

maybe you guys could check out some of my songs https://www.bandlab.com/eljayay_alexander/victory-royale-6ea7a49c?revId=1618ad92-3f9f-ec11-a507-0050f280e91e

velmalovesshaggy145 · Answer

that one is latest

XxMimiXx · Answer

@velmalovesshaggy145 wrote:

maybe you guys could check out some of my songs https://www.bandlab.com/eljayay_alexander/victory-royale-6ea7a49c?revId=1618ad92-3f9f-ec11-a507-0050f280e91e

This was really good lol

velmalovesshaggy145 · Answer

try this one on https://www.bandlab.com/eljayay_alexander/my-love-was-dead-by-drew-mcintyreprod-blankbeat-2746e95e?revId=884bd04b-3a98-ec11-a507-0050f280e91e

XxMimiXx · Answer

This is for my Best friend for our 1st year anniversary and i'm gonna surprise her with this song sooooo if anyone has anymore lyrics that would be great (CREDIT WILL GO TO YOU!!!)

velmalovesshaggy145 · Answer

more?!

XxMimiXx · Answer

@velmalovesshaggy145 wrote:

more?!

ahah yea

LazerHubs · Answer

this is good xoxo, keep up the good work

XxMimiXx · Answer

@lazerhubs wrote:

this is good xoxo, keep up the good work

thx's lol

Alexandralol · Answer

Thanks for the credit even though i wrote most of it. you still gave me ideas!

XxMimiXx · Answer

@alexandralol wrote:

Thanks for the credit even though i wrote most of it. you still gave me ideas!

Yw lol

MochaBerries · Answer

i like it!< 3

cutebunny123 · Answer

Awesome job to both of you guys I love it so much keep up the great work!

ILOVESPAGHETTI · Answer

nice job, as @velmalovesshaggy145 said,

@velmalovesshaggy145 wrote:

You need to find a bpm for it to sound good

Also, is this the full song? This seems like a poem more, considering there doesn't seem to be a repeating chorus. Good job though, I like the rhymes and you guys did really well :)

JadynB · Answer

@ilovespaghetti wrote:

nice job, as @velmalovesshaggy145 said,

@velmalovesshaggy145 wrote:

You need to find a bpm for it to sound good

Also, is this the full song? This seems like a poem more, considering there doesn't seem to be a repeating chorus. Good job though, I like the rhymes and you guys did really well :)

yea unless its a rap, i mean its really good but you should probaly make a courus, and switch up lines to make them actually mean something instead of like just being their to rhyme ya know?, its really good though just as someone who rights songs it needs some tough love

queensclout12 · Answer

Literally this is how I feel about my girl best friend and me eing a guy it's like I'm like slowly falling in love with her.

I wrote a verse for it based solely on my experience with her, and how I fell in love with her, but if you'd like to change it up, I don't mind :)

Lately without you I've been going crazy
I would be so proud to call you my lady
Ain't no one ever is gonna get me
You have been there from the start and I hope I get to call you mine one day
Everyday with the stress of Youtube and being famous on Tiktok
It really gets to me
But baby I'm hoping my fans don't go crazy 
When I finally call you my lady
Thank you for being an amazing best friend
If I could turn back the clock I'd tell you just how I feel
It's real
I mean everyday is a blessing
I hope to be your king one day

Alexandralol · Answer

@cutebunny123 wrote:

Awesome job to both of you guys I love it so much keep up the great work!

Thank youuuu!!