Question

Song I wrote
Let me hit you with this beat
Let me tell you what happened,
Real discreet,
L-O-V-E,
In summary,
Heres my side,now take a seat

I was feenin
I'd been dreamin
What been taken away from me
My crush,My love,My baby
Met her in the stream,
I know how dumb it seems,
But to me,
She was the girl,of my dreams

She's in the UK,
Far away,
No escape,
Yeah no escape
She did a show,
I was with my bro
I look around...There she go

Full of glow,Full of potential,Never broke,Wide awoke,
She was full of energy,good or bad ,
I didn't know,I swooped in,tried to be the heroine
I wasn't the only one,who was listenin in

She is the one,
But is a ten,
Hazel eyes
Shea colored skin
I got excited,
Felt I got invited,
But there was this dude,
Two steps ahead
Suddenly...
My love was dead,
My love was dead,
My love is dead

So I forgot the time,
Forgot the rhyme,
The dude swoops in,
Plays a song,
She loved it,
Even though
It was total jit
That marked the end
It was pointless,
Felt in the red,
My love was dead

She is the one,
But is a ten,
Hazel eyes
Shea colored skin
I got excited,
Felt I got invited,
But there was this dude,
Two steps ahead
Suddenly...
My love was dead,

RIP To my Feelings,
RIP To my Feelings,
Im full of dread
I feel like a pencil
Full of lead

My love was dead....

Answer 1

Nice song

Answer 2

Keep it up 😁

Answer 3

its bad

Answer 4

Shut up its awesome

Answer 5

haha make me

Answer 6

Its better than you could ever do < 3

Answer 7

exactly u prob a girl who came out from the universe of aliens XD

Answer 8

exactly
Also didn't asked

Answer 9

Okrrr buddy

Answer 10

And you assuming my gender?

Answer 11

when

Answer 12

?

Answer 13

did i ask

Answer 14

wym?

Answer 15

damn i honestly feel bad for u

Answer 16

you don't know how to roast someone better

Answer 17

your probs 7 years old bestie

Answer 18

i can help

Answer 19

u down?

Answer 20

sure?

Answer 21

nvm i don't need to

Answer 22

Ok?

Answer 23

but one thing

Answer 24

do u use giggl?

Answer 25

giggl?

Answer 26

Wots that

Answer 27

nvm u don't know

Answer 28

mmk

Answer 29

you got discord

Answer 30

yup

Answer 31

u want it?

Answer 32

sure

Answer 33

nope young lady

Answer 34

who said im young and who said im a lady

Answer 35

Im a rat duhh

Answer 36

ok (didn't asked)

Answer 37

Ok (don't care)

Answer 38

Dude hateful comments arent welcome

Answer 39

Sorry

Answer 40

Ashleen here check it out https://voca.ro/16ku7XYtqAwj

Answer 41

Anyway your amazing at song wrighting keep it up 😁

Answer 42

nah its bad

Answer 43

Youŕe disregarded

Answer 44

So keep talking

Answer 45

ok

Answer 46

blah blah nah u keep talking crap

Answer 47

AMAZING

Answer 48

THAT YOU SINGING?

Answer 49

And don't worry bajjal is just jelly of you lol

Answer 50

its cool