Question

Milagros evelyn diaz
Mr.geber
English 09
24 september 2021

The haunted doll in a dollhouse
Hi I’m Emma, I’m an antique collector, I know that must sound boring but it's quite fun,well it was… before I had gotten that dollhouse. I was looking through an antique shop one day and came across this old dollhouse. It had two storys and was decorated with old antique looking dollhouse furniture, but the thing that caught my eye the most was this old doll. It looked like someone tried to burn it many times.
“Excuse me” emma exclaimed
The store clerk heard Emma and went to help her.
“ good evening madam, what do you need help with” the store clerk asked
“Good Evening to you too, i was wondering how much it would be to purchase the doll and dollhouse” emma asked
The clerk looked at Emma as if she was mad.
“ Sir is there something wrong, are u alright” emma asked the man
“ Oh yes ma’am, it's just are u sure u want this dollhouse” the clerk asked in confusion
“ Oh why yes I do, it’s quite lovely and it would go with my collection” emma responded
The man was confused “ who would want such a haunted thing this woman must be mad” the man thought.
“ So sir how much would it be?” emma asked disrupting the store clerks thought
Then the clerk had an idea, a devilish smile appeared on his face.
“ You take it free of charge ma’am” the clerk said with a devilish smile
“ Are u serious, why thank you, you are the most kind man” emma exclaimed as she picked up the house.

When Emma arrived at her home she was greeted by her butler caliaban.
“Welcome home mrs.smith” caliaban greeted
“ Why hello Caliaban, how has your day been?” emma responded
“ Very well so far” caliban answered
“ Oh and and caliban would you be a dear and grab my new antique from the car and place on my dresser in my room” asked emma
“ Of course mrs.smith” caliban replied

Caliban walked outside to Emma's car and saw the doll house, he was horrified. He froze, then a memory he wanted to forget came back. Caliban was in a small house, then he heard crying. He ran toward the crying, when had found where the crying was coming from he saw it was his mother as he crept closer to his mother he saw that she was holding his little sister in her arms.
“Mom, what's wrong with sissy?” young caliban asked in a confused manner
“Y-your sister was f-fell off her bike a-and she hit h-her head very hard” his mother answered
Caliban was only 12 at the time
“Well we should take her to the hospital then com on mother”

Answer 1

This is excellent. Wonderful dialogue and descriptive characterization!

Answer 2

caliban said picking up his sister out of his mom's arms

“Caliban wait” caliban's mother exclaimed
“Come on mother hurry” caliban said while walking to the car
“Caliban” his mother said as grabbing his shoulder
“S-she’s g-g-gone” his mother said as tears built up in her eyes
“W-what” caliban asked
“ Im sorry dear but she’s gone” caliban's mother said

Caliban fell to his knees as he held his sister in his arms. Then tears began to form in his eyes he began screaming
“Why, why did you leave me, you were my only friend. WHY WHY did you have to leave me”
Caliban hugged his sister for the last time, then he set her down on the porch he went to go and receive her bike as he picked up her bike he saw her doll laying there on the ground. Then he began screaming as he picked up the doll and threw it on the ground. With rage controlling him he picked up the doll and threw it into the garbage. After 30 minutes had passed by the police and the mortician arrived he saw as the police came and picked his sister up off the porch and placed her in the mortician's car. He went inside the house after the police and mortician left as he was walking to his room. He peeked into his sister's room and the doll was sitting on the bed staring at him.
Caliban was confused; he could have sworn he threw the doll away. Thinking his mind was playing tricks on him, he grew angry. Calabain walked into the room and he stopped in front of the doll, caliban he stood there and stared at the doll for a few seconds then he grabbed the doll and threw the doll out of the window. With anger and rage controlling him he stomped out of the room slamming the door behind him and walked to his room. When Caliban reached his room he grabbed his pillow and began screaming into it.

Answer 3

“Caliban dear are you all right” Emma asked
Caliban was snapped back to “Yes mrs.smith my apologies I got distracted”
“It’s alright now come on inside and grab the dollhouse”emma replied
With hesitation, Caliban grabs the doll house and takes it inside. As Caliban is walking he almost falls and almost drops the doll house. With a swift quick move of his feet he caught the dollhouse before it could fall.
“Are you alright!” emma yell from the door rushing to go help him
“I'm quite ok ma’am” caliban responded while setting the dollhouse down
“That's good and good catch”emma said
“Thank you ma’am” caliban responded while brushing off his suit
Caliban grabbed the dollhouse and took the dollhouse inside to Emma's room. After he set the house down in Emma's room she thanked caliban.

Answer 4

this is part of my book

Answer 5

*claps* Yay Noobbbbbb

Answer 6

blink

Answer 7

@riah1

Answer 8

i just love wees

Answer 9

im kidding im straight

Answer 10

Good MLA format

Answer 11

*Whistles and claps* good jod noobbbb

Answer 12

👍👍