new song? called dont bring me down tell me what you think

Dont bring me down
Dont watch me fall
Dont let me cry
Watch me break down
These walls

Dont bring me down
Dont make me feel
Small cause im gonna
Stand tall and give you
Everything I have

And give you everything
That I can let the story
Began and I dont
Give a dam I just dont
Want this to end

So dont bring me down
And dont let me drown
All I can say is I hope
You dont bring me down
And that you stick around

Cause I cant lose the love we
Found and cant have you bring me down
Dont wanna watch you frown
But gotta keep my feet on the ground
And act like no ones around

Question

new song? called dont bring me down  tell me what you think

Dont bring me down
Dont watch me fall
Dont let me cry
Watch me break down
These walls

Dont bring me down
Dont make me feel
Small cause im gonna
Stand tall and give  you
Everything I have

And give you everything 
That I can  let the story 
Began   and I dont 
Give a dam I just dont
Want this to end

So dont bring me down
 And dont let me drown
All I can say is I hope
You dont bring me down
And that you stick around

Cause I cant lose the love we 
Found and cant have you bring me down
Dont wanna watch you frown
But gotta keep my feet on the ground
And act like no ones around

Sailor · Answer

Nice job.

ch3wyc00ki3 · Answer

@sailor wrote:

Nice job.

thxs

Sailor · Answer

@ch3wyc00ki3 wrote:

@sailor wrote:

Nice job.

thxs

No problem. :)

ch3wyc00ki3 · Answer

@hunter3506

hunter3506 · Answer

this is really great i had no clue you could write songs keep it up

ch3wyc00ki3 · Answer

@hunter3506 wrote:

this is really great i had no clue you could write songs keep it up

thanks and yeah I write songs just dont really share them for personal reason's

hunter3506 · Answer

thats great

itsmehjay · Answer

Oh wow this is great! It's very motivational and emotional. Should consider actually singing the song to make it even better!

ch3wyc00ki3 · Answer

@itsmehjay wrote:

Oh wow this is great! It's very motivational and emotional. Should consider actually singing the song to make it even better!

thanks that means alot I was really nervous posting this

itsmehjay · Answer

Aw don't be! This is a safe place and everyones thoughts and feelings would never be judged.

NbaYoungboyFangirl · Answer

name it after me

ch3wyc00ki3 · Answer

@itsmehjay wrote:

Aw don't be! This is a safe place and everyones thoughts and feelings would never be judged.

thanks its just nerve recking putting out personal exsperiences out there yk

ch3wyc00ki3 · Answer

@nbayoungboyfangirl wrote:

name it after me

nah

NbaYoungboyFangirl · Answer

i like it btw

ch3wyc00ki3 · Answer

@nbayoungboyfangirl wrote:

i like it btw

thxs

itsmehjay · Answer

@ch3wyc00ki3 wrote:

@itsmehjay wrote:

Aw don't be! This is a safe place and everyones thoughts and feelings would never be judged.

thanks its just nerve recking putting out personal exsperiences out there yk

Totally understandable.

ch3wyc00ki3 · Answer

@itsmehjay wrote:

@ch3wyc00ki3 wrote:

@itsmehjay wrote:

Aw don't be! This is a safe place and everyones thoughts and feelings would never be judged.

thanks its just nerve recking putting out personal exsperiences out there yk

Totally understandable.

thxs for the feed back though means alot

ch3wyc00ki3 · Answer

any other feed back?

oopdontknowher · Answer

i really like it!

ch3wyc00ki3 · Answer

@oopdontknowher wrote:

i really like it!

thxs first ever song Ive actually put out there

oopdontknowher · Answer

@ch3wyc00ki3 wrote:

@oopdontknowher wrote:

i really like it!

thxs first ever song Ive actually put out there

wow well job well done

ch3wyc00ki3 · Answer

@oopdontknowher wrote:

@ch3wyc00ki3 wrote:

@oopdontknowher wrote:

i really like it!

thxs first ever song Ive actually put out there

wow well job well done

thanks

oopdontknowher · Answer

ur welcome

ch3wyc00ki3 · Answer

any other feed back? so far getting good feed back anything I need to work on?

djkfahdsofid · Answer

Oh my gosh this is really good!! I love ittt! <33

ch3wyc00ki3 · Answer

@djkfahdsofid wrote:

Oh my gosh this is really good!! I love ittt! <33

thanks girl

ch3wyc00ki3 · Answer

@oopdontknowher wrote:

ur welcome

is there anything that needs to be fixed or worked on

oopdontknowher · Answer

@ch3wyc00ki3 wrote:

@oopdontknowher wrote:

ur welcome

is there anything that needs to be fixed or worked on

i think it is good jus the way it is :)

ch3wyc00ki3 · Answer

@oopdontknowher wrote:

@ch3wyc00ki3 wrote:

@oopdontknowher wrote:

ur welcome

is there anything that needs to be fixed or worked on

i think it is good jus the way it is :)

ok do you think I should post more of my songs?

oopdontknowher · Answer

@ch3wyc00ki3 wrote:

@oopdontknowher wrote:

@ch3wyc00ki3 wrote:

@oopdontknowher wrote:

ur welcome

is there anything that needs to be fixed or worked on

i think it is good jus the way it is :)

ok do you think I should post more of my songs?

yessss for sure

ch3wyc00ki3 · Answer

@oopdontknowher wrote:

@ch3wyc00ki3 wrote:

@oopdontknowher wrote:

@ch3wyc00ki3 wrote:

@oopdontknowher wrote:

ur welcome

is there anything that needs to be fixed or worked on

i think it is good jus the way it is :)

ok do you think I should post more of my songs?

yessss for sure

ok