working on a song

From the moment meet
I knew I could never
Let you go sometimes
I just wanna let you know

That since you walked into my life
I havent been the same in a good
Way there isnt even time for
All the things I wanna say

But I dont wanna imagine my life without you
By my side your my ride or die
I'm glad you wanna try
And your glad to have

Me in your life

Question

working on  a song

From the moment meet
I knew I could never 
Let you go  sometimes
I just wanna let you know

That since you walked into my life
I havent been the same in a good
Way there isnt even time for
All the things I wanna say

But I dont wanna imagine my life without you 
By my side   your my ride or die
I'm glad you wanna try  
And your glad to have

Me in your life

hunter3506 · Answer

this looks great so far i cant wait to hear it when its finished

ch3wyc00ki3 · Answer

@hunter3506 wrote:

this looks great so far i cant wait to hear it when its finished

thxs

hunter3506 · Answer

np

letty · Answer

that is sweet and nice job

ch3wyc00ki3 · Answer

@letty wrote:

that is sweet and nice job

thxs

QueenNiyah · Answer

Thats good man

ch3wyc00ki3 · Answer

@queenniyah wrote:

Thats good man

thxs

RodWav3 · Answer

mid yb better

RodWav3 · Answer

and rod better

BADKARMA88 · Answer

I think it is pretty good.

ch3wyc00ki3 · Answer

@rodwav3 wrote:

and rod better

ok

ch3wyc00ki3 · Answer

@badkarma88 wrote:

I think it is pretty good.

thxs

BADKARMA88 · Answer

Yea no problem

Jake15 · Answer

nice

cynthiaclark · Answer

It sound wonderful :) keep up the good work and I cant wait to read the finish product

ch3wyc00ki3 · Answer

@cynthiaclark wrote:

It sound wonderful :) keep up the good work and I cant wait to read the finish product

aww thanks

Jake15 · Answer

i love it

cynthiaclark · Answer

@ch3wyc00ki3 wrote:

@cynthiaclark wrote:

It sound wonderful :) keep up the good work and I cant wait to read the finish product

aww thanks

ofc and im here if u ever need anything girly

ch3wyc00ki3 · Answer

@cynthiaclark wrote:

@ch3wyc00ki3 wrote:

@cynthiaclark wrote:

It sound wonderful :) keep up the good work and I cant wait to read the finish product

aww thanks

ofc and im here if u ever need anything girly

ok thxs

cynthiaclark · Answer

@ch3wyc00ki3 wrote:

@cynthiaclark wrote:

@ch3wyc00ki3 wrote:

@cynthiaclark wrote:

It sound wonderful :) keep up the good work and I cant wait to read the finish product

aww thanks

ofc and im here if u ever need anything girly

ok thxs

ofc

cynthiaclark · Answer

@badkarma88 wrote:

I think it is pretty good.

dm me rq

BADKARMA88 · Answer

ok

CripQUEZZ · Answer

from the moment meet?

ch3wyc00ki3 · Answer

@cripquezz wrote:

from the moment meet?

it is supposed to be we meet im sorry

CripQUEZZ · Answer

@ch3wyc00ki3 wrote:

@cripquezz wrote:

from the moment meet?

it is supposed to be we meet im sorry

oh ok other than the grammer its good LOL

ch3wyc00ki3 · Answer

@cripquezz wrote:

@ch3wyc00ki3 wrote:

@cripquezz wrote:

from the moment meet?

it is supposed to be we meet im sorry

oh ok other than the grammer its good LOL

yeah I think when I pasted it cut off we

ac307 · Answer

it looks really good, but make sure when writing a song if you want to make it serious most songs are in the setup of [verse 1] [verse2] [chorus] [verse 3] verse4] [chorus] and some do another chorus and change the words  but.. that's for like a 2 min song.. I'm releasing a song so that's what I had to learn

ch3wyc00ki3 · Answer

@ac307 wrote:

it looks really good, but make sure when writing a song if you want to make it serious most songs are in the setup of [verse 1] [verse2] [chorus] [verse 3] verse4] [chorus] and some do another chorus and change the words but.. that's for like a 2 min song.. I'm releasing a song so that's what I had to learn

ok

ac307 · Answer

@ch3wyc00ki3 wrote:

@ac307 wrote:

it looks really good, but make sure when writing a song if you want to make it serious most songs are in the setup of [verse 1] [verse2] [chorus] [verse 3] verse4] [chorus] and some do another chorus and change the words but.. that's for like a 2 min song.. I'm releasing a song so that's what I had to learn

ok

that's like if you want a good structure for a like more "professional" set for a song