This is the first part of the story i am writing based off a previous concept post i had made, i stopped right before they go to eat and i might start of the second chapter with them actually in the shop with the continuation of the tension created by Morax. For reference, this story is based off a concept i wrote about Morax and Guizhong being forced to marry for the better of the Guili assembly and Guizhong's village, even though they both love other people. Includes main character death and reincarnation. The actual story will be posted as an image in the comments **THIS IS A FIRST DRAFT THAT HAS NOT BEEN PROOFREAD

(I accidentally posted this in Misc. before so here's a repost** Feedback and constructive criticism is appreciated

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This is the first part of the story i am writing based off a previous concept post i had made, i stopped right before they go to eat and i might start of the second chapter with them actually in the shop with the continuation of the tension created by Morax. For reference, this story is based off a concept i wrote about Morax and Guizhong being forced to marry for the better of the Guili assembly and Guizhong's village, even though they both love other people. Includes main character death and reincarnation. The actual story will be posted as an image in the comments **THIS IS A FIRST DRAFT THAT HAS NOT BEEN PROOFREAD

(I accidentally posted this in Misc. before so here's a repost** Feedback and constructive criticism is appreciated

Clayy69 · Answer

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THEKINGOFTHEMATRIX · Answer

Awesome dude. Keep up the good work!

MochaBerries · Answer

its greattt<3

Clayy69 · Answer

Forgot to mention this is based off of Genshin impact lore but you dont need to know the lore really to understand the story

THEKINGOFTHEMATRIX · Answer

@clayy69 wrote:

Forgot to mention this is based off of Genshin impact lore but you dont need to know the lore really to understand the story

I know the lore though. But yeah.

7469838583 · Answer

keep going at it and trying your best

Aurxlina · Answer

Good Job! I like it

damako32 · Answer

good

Heheheh · Answer

Y'all are so talented like Cheese. I can't even make up a story like WOW! Good job, keep it up!!

Clayy69 · Answer

@heheheh wrote:

Y'all are so talented like Cheese. I can't even make up a story like WOW! Good job, keep it up!!

thank you thank you 🙌

Heheheh · Answer

@clayy69 wrote:

@heheheh wrote:

Y'all are so talented like Cheese. I can't even make up a story like WOW! Good job, keep it up!!

thank you thank you 🙌

yeah no problem you are going to have to teach me how to lmaooo

Clayy69 · Answer

@heheheh wrote:

@clayy69 wrote:

@heheheh wrote:

Y'all are so talented like Cheese. I can't even make up a story like WOW! Good job, keep it up!!

thank you thank you 🙌

yeah no problem you are going to have to teach me how to lmaooo

im gonna be honest my brain just kinda comes up with a concept, i end up really liking it and the next thing i know its 5 am and this happens lol

Heheheh · Answer

@clayy69 wrote:

@heheheh wrote:

Lmao damn im a crackhead at 5 am

@clayy69 wrote:

@heheheh wrote:

Y'all are so talented like Cheese. I can't even make up a story like WOW! Good job, keep it up!!

thank you thank you 🙌

yeah no problem you are going to have to teach me how to lmaooo

im gonna be honest my brain just kinda comes up with a concept, i end up really liking it and the next thing i know its 5 am and this happens lol

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