Guys um i wrote a song-
"I've been up all night, thinking of how we're alike, we've being good at our own disguise, i can tell by the mascaras on our eyes, with fear inside. And i know the worse part, to be rippen and torn apart, I'm sorry for your broken heart, i know that life can be hard."
"She breaking the guy, all that he wants is the good of his life. He was there since i was zero 2 now he knows im just a normal dude, from time to time knowing the differences, knowing we're alike and far cuzz distance"
"I'm sorry for that, i know the feeling of the stab in the back, i know the feeling of wanting to die but let me tell you bro don't even try cuzz im with you till the end of the line"
"It's too late, I'm sitting here, right at heavens gate, don't say it's luck, don't try and say it's Fate, I hate this place but at any rate, I got my head in the clouds, oh bro they say it's great, man, I'm just so tired, I wanna get a clean slate, I'm switching sides, i just can't wait" - can yall tell me what do you think?

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Guys um i wrote a song-                                                                                               
 "I've been up all night, thinking of how we're alike, we've being good at our own disguise, i can tell by the mascaras on our eyes, with fear inside. And i know the worse part, to be rippen and torn apart, I'm sorry for your broken heart, i know that life can be hard."
"She breaking the guy, all that he wants is the good of his life. He was there since i was zero 2 now he knows im just a normal dude, from time to time knowing the differences, knowing we're alike and far cuzz distance"
"I'm sorry for that, i know the feeling of the stab in the back, i know the feeling of wanting to die but let me tell you bro don't even try cuzz im with you till the end of the line"
"It's too late, I'm sitting here, right at heavens gate, don't say it's luck, don't try and say it's Fate, I hate this place but at any rate, I got my head in the clouds, oh bro they say it's great, man, I'm just so tired, I wanna get a clean slate, I'm switching sides, i just can't wait" - can yall tell me what do you think?

CrackedNuts · Answer

This is really good! i would love to see more!

TotallyNotJay · Answer

Dats gud bestie. Keep it up UwU

Scorpion13 · Answer

BRUHHH THAT IS SICK

XxIceBearsWifexX · Answer

This is very gud n I like it, I would love to see moreee

kacchan · Answer

its gud fam nice job keep up the gud work

badboy1557 · Answer

@crackednuts wrote:

This is really good! i would love to see more!

Thank you, I'll try to make time for it

badboy1557 · Answer

@kacchan wrote:

its gud fam nice job keep up the gud work

Thanks and i will

badboy1557 · Answer

@scorpion13 wrote:

BRUHHH THAT IS SICK

Bruhv lol you such a dummah lol but thanks brother

badboy1557 · Answer

@totallynotjay wrote:

Dats gud bestie. Keep it up UwU

Hehe gg thx

Aubree · Answer

👍*100,000,000,000,000,000

badboy1557 · Answer

@Y2knic2

badboy1557 · Answer

@Raynestorm

Sharkattack123 · Answer

its a hot song

Sharkattack123 · Answer

but annoying 2 read >_>

badboy1557 · Answer

@sharkattack123 wrote:

but annoying 2 read >_>

thx kasy ly Lol

Sharkattack123 · Answer

@badboy1557 wrote:

@sharkattack123 wrote:

but annoying 2 read >_>

thx kasy ly Lol

2 bad cant say the same

badboy1557 · Answer

@sharkattack123 wrote:

@badboy1557 wrote:

@sharkattack123 wrote:

but annoying 2 read >_>

thx kasy ly Lol

2 bad cant say the same

Its not like its true

badboy1557 · Answer

But anyway

Sharkattack123 · Answer

bc u wish i can say it back

badboy1557 · Answer

@sharkattack123 wrote:

bc u wish i can say it back

I fr dont i didnt meant in that dumba.ss

prettygirl09 · Answer

oop dis ish great luv keep up the great work<3

Sharkattack123 · Answer

@badboy1557 wrote:

@sharkattack123 wrote:

bc u wish i can say it back

I fr dont i didnt meant in that dumba.ss

if u say so

badboy1557 · Answer

@06natrod52378

Raynestorm · Answer

@badboy1557 wrote:

@Raynestorm

Hey...This is amazing