About this Fanfiction… Introduction:Its been over 5 plus years Mystery Inc split up and went their separete ways after defeating Professor Pericles.But some things can withstand anything and everything.Especially,love.With…a one Velma Dinkly and a former goof-off named Norville “Shaggy” Rogers. Chapter 1:The Friendship Finale (OR Is it?) Continue reading to find out… After the overrated,outmatched owl got got. Shaggy and the one and only Scooby Doo had a falling out.(flashback) “Well Raggy we did it”,said the Great Dane.Shaggy replied,”We sure did Scooby my old pal.” Scooby exclaimed.”Raggy lets celebrate,with burgers,french fries,pizza,ice cream,donuts and Scooby Sna…!!!! “SCOOBY LIKE BREATH MAN!”,said Norville.The two then began to empty out their refrigerator,Food to food,drink to drink,desertt to desertt,another desert,and ended the chow fest with the infamous Scooby Snacks..Scooby began to throw the scooby snacks in the air so shaggy could catch them in the air.So scooby threw them,But before Shaggy could even attempt to catch and or even eat the SS.Scooby Doo caught leaped faster than the flash,jumped higher than a given momentum via trampoline,and caught and ate the Scooby Snacks.Shaggy burst out with the utmost anger “SCOOBY GET OUT,YOU’VE BEEN TAKING FOOD FROM UNDER ME AND LIKE OVER ME SINCE “A pup named Scooby Doo”!..Well not anymore!! Scooby with his puppy eyes,expressed himself more openly than ever before, “B-But Raggy where am i supposed to go.I depend on you Raggy.”Shaggy replied,”Im sorry scooby,I just cant take it anymore. Im so sorry Scooby…”Raggy can you think about this and re-consider our friendship” Rogers said,” I guess scoob.But untill then back off.I’ll miss you.” Scooby Doo exited Sgayy’s cribe with not just his puppy eyes,but with sad,puppy eyes filled with tears.
I love the details! Maybe fix the part where there's a comma and add a space after the comma so it's easier to read? Other than that I love it!
i love this! cant wait for a chapter 2
lovely, this is good keep up the good work
The only thing is the punctuation but WOW! Try using Grammarly.
I love it, keep up the good work. < 3
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